Imagine that for one day only you could have a pet monkey! What would you do with your pet? What would you name him/her? What adventures would you two have? Please describe your day with your new friend.
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If I had a pet monkey, I would name it Bailey. If I could do anything with Bailey, I would go to the park to let her play. Of course, I would have to play too. We would mostly play at the monkey bars. Our hearts would start to pump in excitement. After that, we would go to California Pizza Kitchen. Bailey would get a big pepperoni pizza, and I would get mac and cheese. We would mainly just stay there and talk with each other. After that, we would go to the candy store and get lots of candy. Bailey would get all banana flavored candy. Finally, we would go home and snuggle up on the couch. I would read Curious George to her, and she would fall asleep in my arms. That would be my day with Bailey.
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If I had a monkey for a day I would name him Calvin. First I would get him a banana and he could sit on my shoulder while we walk to the park or Parthenon. When we get to the park or Parthenon, I would climb a tree with him. Next we would go to the store and by every single banana and every single chocolate milk carton. Then at the end of the day we would watch a movie while he falls asleep in my arms. And that is what my day would be like with Calvin.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Willy. Willy and I would go everywhere, we would start a place called Chuck E Cheese, we would probably die because of the germs then we would eat tons of pizza and gain lots of pounds. Like break the weigher kind of pounds. Then we would get ice cream and my pet monkey Willy would probably be so big I can’t carry him then we would go home I would then read him Mickey mouse's weird adventures then he would fall asleep.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey, her name would be Callie and we would have lots of fun together. If we could do anything together, we would go out for ice cream and we would get banana splits. After that we would go all over town and climb trees and eat bananas. For lunch we would try different fruits and eat candy. Then we would just read books with monkeys for the rest of the day. That is what I would do if a I had a pet monkey for a day.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey I would name it Jeff. I would go around to the toy store and buy him a monkey. Then I would go the park and play around with him. Next we would go to the grocery store and buy him so many bananas. Finally we would go home and watch a monkey movie that is awesome. Today has been a great day with Jeff
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a pet monkey for one day, I would name her Hannah. Hannah and I would go to the park and we would play on the monkey bars and on the slides. After that we would have a picnic. Then we would go to the ice cream store and Hannah would get a banana split! Then we would go home and watch a movie. After the movie, Hannah and I would go to bed. That would be my day with a pet monkey!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey, her name would be Baily. The first thing we would do is go have breakfast at the rainforest cafe. Then, we would go to the park and play together on the monkey bars. After that, we would go to above all and play on the net hammock by the big trampoline. Then, we would go to the ice cream shop. Of course she would eat banana flavor but I would eat huckleberry ice cream. Then, we would return home and watch the movie The Last Jedi. Then, we would have dinner and go to bed together.
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If I had a monkey for a day his name would be King Money. I would spoil him like crazy, and he would have 7 trillion dollars. I would build him 77 mansions, and the sad thing is, he would only stay in 12 of his mansions. PLEASE DON’T CRY. He would only eat the best food in the world. He would get backstage passes to 15 rap concerts. He would also go to San Francisco in his 24k gold yacht. When his day was up. I would build a mansion in the wild for him. Then he could play with all his monkey friends in luxury. He would have a 24k gold pool, and 90 diamond rolexes, 15 gold rolexes. Then he would eat steak every time dinner came around. That is what I would do if I had monkey has a pet.
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ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name her…..I don’t want to name her it is only for one day anyway.We would eat ice cream….um….I don’t really like monkeys so…..I would read to it and take it out to a restaurant and take it back at 7:00 pm and go home and sleep with my dog.
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ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey her name would be See See. First we would go to Sweet See See’s and get frozen yogurt. See See would get banana I would get cupcake batter. Then we would go to Chick Fil A and order milkshakes and chicken nuggets. Then we would go home and watch The Hunger Games 1. And then we would go in my art room and paint. Then we would go on the trampoline. That is what I would do with my day with See See.
If I had my own monkey it would be named Bananas and his nickname would be Bonkos. We would have matching shirts that had black, red, and white bananas on it. They would also have a big G in the background for Georgia. We would go to a Georgia game and watch them CRUSH the Tennessee Vols. Then, we would go on the field and meet Nick Chubb and Jake Fromm! Then, we would go lunch at Dominos! After Dominos we would get more matching shirts. These shirts would be jerseys of Jake Fromm and Nick Chubb! Then, we would go to Above All and everyone would stare at us because I would have a random monkey named Bananas jumping all over the place like a CRAZY person! When we go home we would sit by the fire, roast marshmallows, drink hot chocolate, and watch TV! It would be the best day ever!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey for a day his name would be King Money. I would spoil him like crazy, and he would have 7 trillion dollars. I would build him 77 mansions, and the sad thing is, he would only stay in 12 of his mansions. PLEASE DON’T CRY. He would only eat the best food in the world. He would get backstage passes to 15 rap concerts. He would also go to San Francisco in his 24k gold yacht. When his day was up. I would build a mansion in the wild for him. Then he could play with all his monkey friends in luxury. He would have a 24k gold pool, and 90 diamond rolexes, 15 gold rolexes. Then he would eat steak every time dinner came around. That is what I would do if I had monkey as a pet.
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ReplyDeleteFirst, I would name it Harrison Mobley jr. Second, I would make my monkey perform on the streets, so we join the circus. Then, we would get a bunch of money so I could move out of my house and give the house to Harrison Mobley jr because in case you already did not know the monkey would be trashing my house, breaking windows, he would be climbing furniture, and he would be so loud that we would only get 0.1 seconds of sleep! But then on the other hand, when I give the house away to the monkey I would move into a 5.7 million dollar mansion, and it would come with 5,000,000 butlers! But then at the end, I would give it to the Nashville zoo. Here is what the scene would be like… “ Bye Harrison Mobley jr!” Harrison cried.
“Whoop whoop!” the monkey screamed.
“ I have no idea what you are saying but bye!” Then the monkey scampered into the animal control bus.
If I had a monkey for the day, I would name it sspafageman jr. first we would go go to the white house and rob it. Then we would take that money and buy a house bigger than the white house. Then we would go to mcdonalds and force them to work at chick ful a. After that, we would go to Jake Paul and burn him so bad, that he would cry and give me and sspafageman jr. the Team 10 house. After that, we will to the president of the world and steal his 24k gold watch, TV, and pool and we will become the presidents of the world.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey I would name him Rex,and we would have a giant house.
ReplyDeleteThe first thing we would do would be to get ice cream, Then we would go to a trampoline park, Ok now we’re getting into the good stuff , we are going to an amusement park. For dinner we would go to Moe’s and we are going to get homewreckers. At night we will get popcorn and candy for the movie the last Jedi. It is about 9:00 at night. I told Rex some places for milkshakes are open 24/7. When we get our milkshakes we will go to Dave and busters and get some jackpots. So now it is 12:00 in the night so we will end our day but we will do it again tomorrow.
And that is how I will spend my day with Rex…………………………………………..
First i think the monkey will wake me up. Then we would watch curious George. Then we would make a house. For him with lots of lots of bad banana has. And i would take him to school! And he would take mr terance to copland bye bye basketball shoes. Copland bumps into van. Then van meets terence van jumps on the roof and the monkey gets him. Pulls him down while eating YEEZES. Yzah but can not tell the tragic thing that happened to jackson. THE END CBaker
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey for a day, I would name it rouse mouse Jr.first,We would go to pancake pantry. Then, we would drive to dave and busters and play a lot of games.Last, we would have lunch at the food court.Finley,we would watch star wars The Last Jedi .That's what I would do if a had a pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey it would be a girl and I would name it Rosie. First, I would get her ready for the day and get her outfit. Next, we would have breakfast. Then, I would drive to the mall and spend six hours at the mall buying stuff. Later, we will go to the movies. After the movie we would come home and eat our sweets. Then, we would make slime. I would invite her friends and my friends and we would have a girls night sleepover. That would be my fun day with Rosie. Love, Joyce
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a monkey for a pet for one day. I would name it chip- the awesome monkey.We would play sports eat a ton of candy and also have a big nerf war. Then we would watch a movie. Finally we would eat a lot of junk food. That would be my day with a monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a pet monkey for a day,I would do lots of things with it. First, I would name it Dorito. Next, we would go to Ihop and get pancakes to start our day. Then, we would go to the park and run around. After that, the two of us would go get lunch at Chick-Fil-A. We would get chicken with french fries and lemonade. Finally, we would go and get popcorn while we watch a comedy movie. If I could have a monkey, that is what I would do with it.
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ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey I would name it Sprinkles. Sprinkles and I would start our day off by going to Florida and picking bananas and making banana bread. Then we would go to Chick-fil-a and I would get a 12-count nuggets with fries and a lemonade and Sprinkles would get the kids meal. Then we would fly back to Nashville and go to Dollywood and Six Flags. That is what I would do If I had a monkey for a day.
If I had a pet monkey I would name him Monkey. First we would go to Athens and he would get 10 pancakes with banana in it and eat them all, I would get a bacon egg and cheese sandwich supreme. Then we would go buy 20 lambos and we would drive them and show them off. Then we would sit around and drink redbull and eat chips while playing video games. It would be so fun.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey we would go on kingda ka at six flags great adventure. The monkey's name would be jeff. And we would go on all the rides at six flags and the first ride would be kingda ka. And on the way there we would ride in my lambo. And at the way back we would ride in a target jet.
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a pet monkey for a day, I would name him Bob. He would be brown and tan. We would go to the movies and watch 10 movies. Bob would eat 9 packs of Skittles, and I would eat 3 packs of starburst. After the movies we would go to a water park. We would slide down a huge water slide that would make our stomachs jump, and then after we ride all of the water slides we would go to the jungle and see all of Bob's monkey friends. Then we go home and watch a movie and cuddle.
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DeleteIf I had a monkey I would name it COO-COO. We would get matching sweatshirts and pants. We would go to the state fair and get face paint in the shape of bananas. Then buy ice cream, and cotton candy. We would go to Pei Wei and open 45 fortune cookies. We would have the same lucky number and color. Then we would go to school and do experiments with baking soda and vinegar. And after a long day we would go to sleep in matching P.J.s. That's what I would do with COO-COO.
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a monkey for a day I would call him Jackson the 2. We would do fun stuff like go get lots of cool cars like Lamborghinis and Bugattis. We would also go watch football games. We would go to Moe’s, Chick- Fil- A and Blue- Coast- Burrito. We would also go to the movies every day.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey I would name it Greg. The first thing we did was go to a water park and go down the slides really fast. Then we will go for a drive in my new Lamborghini with it’s bright read paint job. Then we will go to a Nashville Sounds baseball game and Greg caught a foul ball. After that we would go to a Friday the 13 haunted house and right when we walked in the door behind us closed. Right in front of us was Jason, Greg had a heart attack and we had to rush him to the hospital. But the hospital was closed so Greg died and I commited suicide so I could see him in heaven. Good thing that was just a dream if it was real I would puke.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Smokie. I would go to the park with him for 3 hours. Of course, we would play on the monkey bars and the slide. After that, we would go shopping for Lamborghini’s and Bugatti’s.
ReplyDeleteWe would go to Chik-Fil-A for lunch. Then we would Top Golf and Above All. We would go to Sperry’s for dinner. Then we would go home and get in a warm blanket and watch Monkey Kingdom.
If I had a monkey for one day, I would name it Chick. The first thing I would do with Chick would be going to Sam’s Place for breakfast. He would get bacon and french toast, and I would get the breakfast potatoes and eggs. After we ate lunch at Burgerfi, we would get ice cream and soda at an ice cream shop. He would get the Crazy Colors flavor ice cream and coke, and I would get Cotton Candy flavored ice cream and pepsi. Then, we would go to Five Guys for dinner. Finally, we would rent a hotel room and sleep there for the night. This would be my day with Chick.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey for a day I would her Turtle Teacup Pig Bananas Monkey Candy Lollipop. I would take her to the park and we would climb trees and do gymnastics. I would feed her her lunch of bananas, brownies, and cantaloupe. Then, we would go to Sweet Cece’s and get a lot of ice cream. I would buy her a baby monkey onesie little shoes. We would go to the movies and watch the new Wonder movie. Then we would go home and I would take Turtle Teacup Pig Bananas Monkey Candy Lollipop to take a nap while i would finish the book, WONDER.
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DeleteIf I could Have a monkey for a day I would name him pig. We would go to Disney World ,and go on scavenger hunts.We would also go to Animal Kingdom so he could play with his friends. We would eat chocolate bananas for lunch. Than We would go to Mexico (in epcot). Watch the sunset. Then we would go home and watch Curious George. Fanally, he would fall asleep because of our big day.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it peaches. Peaches and I would start of the day by waking up and making a mess of our bed. Then we would eat a yummy breakfast of fruit loop cereal, bananas, and some orange juice to drink with it. Then we would go to jump street and Peaches would show all of the kids his skills and the kids would all laugh. Next we would go to the zoo and Peaches would see all of his monkey friends and play with them. While peaches was playing, I would go order us some subway to eat for lunch. After we ate lunch, we would go to the mall to go shopping and Peaches would help me pick out the cutest outfits. Later at the mall I would show Peaches the adorable banana onesie I wanted to get him. When we were finally done shopping, we would go home and drink some hot chocolate while eating homemade banana bread in front of the TV. We would watch the movie trolls until we fell asleep. And that would be my day with Peaches.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name it Harry Potter. For breakfast, we would go to Ihop. Next we would go to Harry Potter land in Universal Studios. We would go on the Forbidden Fortress ride in Hogwarts, then go to Hogsmeade. Harry Potter and I would stock up on magical candy from Honeydukes, like chocolate cauldrons. Then we would go on the Hogwarts Express to go to Diagon and Knockturn Alley. We would go to Weasley's Wizard Wheezes. I would get Skiving Snack boxes, love potions, and extendible ears, and so would Harry Potter. After that, we would go to Borgin and Burkes. Harry Potter and I would get some of the wanted posters, then go to the Leakey Cauldron for lunch. Dessert would be at Florean Fortescue's Ice Cream. Harry Potter would get banana and I would get butterbeer. We would run to catch thetrain to Hogsmeade. Harry Potter and I would be so excited for the butterbeer at the Three Broomsticks. Then we would go back to our hotel and sleep in a fuzzy blanket on the floor while listening to Hamilton. That would be my day with Harry Potter.
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