Dear students,
Please write at least a 5 sentence paragraph about the following:
Imagine you opened your own restaurant. What would the name of your restaurant be? What kind of food would you serve? What does your restaurant look like? Where is your restaurant located? Have fun and be creative.
Remember, students, to watch out for run-ons, and to write in complete sentences. I look forward to reading your comments!
Your paragraph must…
Your paragraph must…
- be at least 5 sentences long
- written in complete sentences
- use M.I.N.T.S.
- have a topic sentence and supporting details
- have a closing sentence
Here is an example of an advanced/proficient comment:
If I could open up a restaurant, its name would be Rene's. This restaurant would have all the Italian food you could ever imagine! Every person would get an appetizer, entree, and a very good desert. The walls in this restaurant would have pictures of Italy all over it. You would sit in booths, a table, or upstairs in a high top. We would serve lasagna, pizza, any type of pasta, and much more Italian food. If I could open up this restaurant, I would do it because of my dad's side of the family is Italian! All of my employees would come straight from the best restaurants in Italy! We would have Italian people come to our restaurant just because our food is so good. My restaurant would always be playing Italian music or have a famous Italian singer there. If I had this restaurant, it would mean so much to my guests, employees, my family and friends.
Happy blogging,
Mrs. Eads
My restaurant name would be the fact
ReplyDeleteAnd the food would be a all you can eat buffet. And you would have to pay 1,000,000$ and you can go on roller coasters because there are roller coasters in my restaurant.
If I could own my own restaurant, it would be the best one ever. First of all, it would be located in Hawaii, so it would be automatically awesome. Next, it would have every type of food. Then, we would have a machine where when you walked in, two sensors scanned you and detected what type of food you wanted at that moment. Also, we would an awesome drink machine where you tapped it and it sensed what type of drink you wanted. People would come from all over the world to the the famous restaurant called Pack’s Place.
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DeleteMy restaurant name would be the fact
ReplyDeleteAnd the food would be a all you can eat buffet. And you would have to pay 1,000,000$. you can go on roller coasters because there are roller coasters in my restaurant.and you would also get to go on water slides.
That sounds so cool
DeleteIf i could eat anything. I would go to a store and get a ton of candy. Then i would make a candy house. And i would watch TV and eat candy. But for dinner I would eat food that was made out of candy. Finally I would sleep while eating. That would be my day to eat whatever I want to eat.
ReplyDeleteMarble Slab Rollin-Cream would be the best ice cream place ever!!! There would be 3 T.V.s playing Disney Channel and we would have sing along time. On Saturday ice cream is free 11:00-3:00 and ALL YOU CAN EAT TOPPINGS!!! You can win free ice cream for a month!! I hope you will come!!!
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ReplyDeleteIf I could open a restaurant I would call it Sweet Tart’s (the turtle) ice cream. We would serve every type of ice cream and gelato that you can imagine. You can also buy cookies and bakery items. You can even adopt pet turtles there. I would hire my family and friends and my pet turtle (Sweet Tart) would be the mascot. Every time you purchase ice cream or gelato you get another free cup of ice cream or gelato. This ice creamery would be very yummy
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DeleteIf owned a restaurant I would name Beef Baby BBQ, and I would have a restaurant in every city. My restaurant will serve BBQ and chesse burgers. We would also serve hand spun milkshakes. For the kids who come to the restaurant we will have playground that we stole from Wendy’s. We will have a pig race every Saturday and the pig that gets last place will be cooked because they have the most fat. Then we will race the pigs again intil there is only one pig left and that pig gets to live on my farm. We will be a world wide restaurant and have Beef Baby BBQ in China. We will be the biggest restaurant in the world.
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ReplyDeleteIf I could open a restaurant it would not be a restaurant it would be an ice cream shop. I would name it Ice Ice Baby. We would have floating chairs with a wall of ice cream flavors and another wall with toppings. You would float up to the flavors and toppings you wanted. Also you could pay $1 for a raffle ticket and if your name gets picked you win half of the prophets made through the raffle tickets towards ice cream.
If I could open a restaurant, it would be named the cluk cluk chicken . It would serve omelets of your choose in the morning. It would serve chicken in the in the afternoon. It would serve chicken at night also. People might just think is sit down and eat, but really it has an outdoor theme park. It would be 70 dollar$ to get in, but it has the best chicken in the world. It would be the best restaurant because it would be the most fun.
ReplyDeleteIf I had my own restaurant. I would call it Bobbie Burgers. Bobbie Burgers would be up on a rainbow. You would have to have a rainbow car to get up to Bobbie Burgers. Bobbie Burgers would have every color in the world on it’s building, and it would have rainbow burgers, hot dogs, mashed potatoes, and even macaroni. Bobbie Burgers would be a humongous restaurant. It would have free teacup pigs for anybody who comes. That is what my restaurant would be!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a restaurant I would name it JACKSON’S PLACE. I would have taco’s, nuggets, chicken sandwiches ice cream, and cookies. It would be in Nashville, Tennessee near a park. There would be rollercoasters, a park, and a movie theater. Aaron Rodgers would go there every day and sign autographs.
ReplyDeleteIf I created my own restaurant I would call it “Burger Jackpot” [this will NOT be a fast food restaurant!]. I would serve burgers of all toppings and sizes, fries[with all toppings], broccoli, chicken, etc. My restaurant would be 36 by 36 yards, and would have a big jackpot sign as a logo on the side. My restaurant would be located in Nashville, TN. This would be my restaurant!
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a bakery I would name it Charlie and the Cupcake Factory(and more!)It would have a cupcake ATM machine. Also a cupcake bank. A cupcake bank is you give cupcakes to the poor and you receive for free.You only get one if you give one (that’s also my slogan).I would belike magie from magpies and remember everyone who comes to my store.I would love my bakery and I hope everyone else does to.
ReplyDeleteIf I could open a restaurant, it would be called The Awesome Place. It would be a sports bar. It would be located in New York City. The dinner and lunch menu would be, Burgers and fries, Chicken and fries, Pizza, Pasta, Salads, Tacos, Quesadillas, Sandwiches and fries, and Barbeque. And for desserts I would have Cakes, Ice Cream, Cupcakes, Apple Cobbler, Pies, Popsicles, Cookies, and Brownies. It would be decorated with money signs all around the walls. It would have 100 T.V’s. we would have a gift shop. All of the famous people would come. Everything cost $1,000,000. But it would be worth it. It would also have a huge playground. And it will also have a putt putt course and go cart. So come on down to The Awesome Place.
ReplyDeleteIf I could open my own restaurant, it would be Harry Potter themed. I would call it The Four Broomsticks. My restaurant would have british food in one area, Honeydukes candy in another, Weasleys Wizard Wheezes in the next area, and butterbeer in the last area. All of the employes would dress up as Harry Potter characters and talk in a british accent. The restaurant would have many Harry Potter rides. That would be what I would do as my restaurant.
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DeleteIf I could have a restaurant it would be called The Place and it would be awesome. We would also have a all you can eat buffet. We would have tacos and pizza and cupcakes and chicken and sandwiches also french fries. Then we would have a eating contest they would have to eat 20 pounds of meat a minute, the winner would get $100,000,000. Then we would have a dodgeball court and we would have a tournament.so then we would have a gotcha tournament and I would win, because owners are allowed to join. Then we would all do to the gift shop and buy merch to admire. So the store would be a big hit. Also we would have 100 T.Vś then after that we would not have anymore money to spend. After that we would eat all the food then go out of business. Heres our slogan, ¨come to the place to have lots of fun¨ until it goes out of business. After we went out of business I would listen to quavo and drink red bull all day. Then I would chill the rest of my life.and my pet monkey would come back and be friends with me. So I would be happy for the rest of my life. So i would be wealthy so i would open a new restaurant down the street from the old one. Then nobody would know that I owned the old one because it went out of business then i would get raged on if they knew the whole story. Man would I be happy about that. Then that one would go out of business to then I would repeat the whole thing over again and again and again and again until i died because of to much redbull
ReplyDeleteIf I had a restaurant I would name it Emmies because that is my nick name. The restaurant would be all Mexican food, and there would be a band playing Mexican music while people were eating. We would serve tacos, rice, beans, and much more. For dessert you were offered a free milkshake with your dessert. All the customers would get a souvenir which would be a mini Hat from Mexico. All of my chefs would dance while baking, and they would form a crowd of people watching them dance. And that’s would my restaurant would be like if I owned one.
ReplyDeleteIf I could open a restaurant I would call it the Piggle’s Cafe. We would had a gift shop that only sold pig things. Also, while you are waiting for your food you get to go play arcade games in the game room. You could chose any food you will ever think of and our chefs will cook it for you! Our logo would be buy a meal and get one free! We would have paintings all over the cafe.That is what I would do if I did open a restaurant.
ReplyDeleteIf I could open a restaurant I would call it the Piggle’s Cafe. We would had a gift shop that only sold pig things. Also, while you are waiting for your food you get to go play arcade games in the game room. You could chose any food you will ever think of and our chefs will cook it for you! Our logo would be buy a meal and get one free! We would have paintings all over the cafe.That is what I would do if I did open a restaurant.
ReplyDeleteIf I could open a restaurant I would call it the Piggle’s Cafe. We would had a gift shop that only sold pig things. Also, while you are waiting for your food you get to go play arcade games in the game room. You could chose any food you will ever think of and our chefs will cook it for you! Our logo would be buy a meal and get one free! We would have paintings all over the cafe.That is what I would do if I did open a restaurant.
ReplyDeleteIf I could open a restaurant I would call it the Piggle’s Cafe. We would had a gift shop that only sold pig things. Also, while you are waiting for your food you get to go play arcade games in the game room. You could chose any food you will ever think of and our chefs will cook it for you! Our logo would be buy a meal and get one free! We would have paintings all over the cafe.That is what I would do if I did open a restaurant.
ReplyDeleteMy restaurant would be called DERP BURGERS 4 BROS.
ReplyDeleteI would serve five star burgers, over 100 milkshakes and lots of fries, and my motto is “when health inspector come… I run.” Some people say my restaurant gives them problems, but other people say it makes them gain lots of pounds, just like Mcdonald's. I hope you come to my restaurant….. Maybe not because you may not survive the whole entire night so good luck.
If i had a restaurant it would be in Honolulu , Hawaii the best place ever. The bar would be called
ReplyDeleteCrimson tide bar. You can eat anything For free and the desserts are also free. It would be awesome. It is made of red and white Ruby and Quartz. There is also an arcade. Their is alabama symbols eveywere.
If I owned a restaurant it would be cald Sweet Treat Bakery. It would serve ice cream,cookies,cake,and pie. Everyone will bounce up and down for more.
ReplyDeleteIt will be located in Hawaii. Inside there would be a lot of lights and cool stuff.
ALL YOU CAN EAT!!!!
ReplyDeleteMy restaurant would be named GOLD DIGGERS! So from the name of the restaurant it has very expensive. But it matters not on how wealthy it matters about the shoes and there hair line. So if i were to come everything would be cheap. But if someone with garbage hair or new balance shoes or just any bad shoes it would be not cheap but if the elderly's then they are always welcome. #FREE YEEZEES.
If I had a restaurant I would call it “Cope’s Diner.” I would serve breakfast like eggs and bacon(All though I would eat the bacon but anyway) and pancakes. We would also serve lunch and dinner. We would originally be in Brentwood, Tennessee, but we’ll get so famous that we’ll go nation wide(not to brag). Our motto is “We’ll light your ‘tummy’ up, wink, wink.” But seriously, I’m going to put lights around the diner. So come on down to Cope’s Diner.
ReplyDeleteIf i made a restaurant I would call it rouse mouse bar . We would sever mice and tacos. We would also have a bar for all ages. Then, In the back we would have a pool.Last, There would be a free ice cream. (With the purchase of $30 or more. ) Finley, You can look us up to call or make reservations at www.Rousemouse.org.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a restaurant it would be called Home-made Kitchen. It would be in NYC, Nashville, and Florida. When you walk in you will sign in and get a room number. Say your number was 3 you would go into your private room, number 3! Inside your room you get your own pantry (that has food in it), fridge (with food in it), stove, microwave, oven, and TV. You would have as long as you want, and you get to make one meal, drink, side item, and dessert. If you're not that good of a cook there would be a giant cook-book with every thing in the world that you could possibly make. When you are done you can eat whatever you just made and it would only be $10 person! If you come to my Restaurant 10 times you get 1 person to come in for FREE!!
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a bakery, it would be called Baguette because that’s a really good type of french bread. It would be in California, not in the city but on the beach. There would be fresh baked breads, pastries, and all kinds of coffee. Everything would be fresh and organic. Everything would be tasty and nothing would be artificial. It might not seem like the fanciest or the craziest but you go to a restaurant to eat good food and get good service and that’s exactly what this restaurant would have.
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DeleteIf I owned my own restaurant, it would be named Uni-cloud Spin.On the outside, it would have unicorns dancing on rainbows painted on the wall. The roof would be made out clouds. On the inside, the walls would be rainbow painted. The booths, tables, bar, high tables, and the chairs would be made out of clouds. They would have delicious appetizers, food, and desserts that are rainbow flavored. When you were done and were leaving, you could take a baby unicorn and a mom unicorn home with you.
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If I had my own restaurant, it would be an all you can eat buffet. It would be named Chubby Bob’s all you can eat. I would serve the most unhealthy stuff ever, and what I would want to see in the restaurant would be this… ( door swings open ) “ listen up people” the man said “ Me and my friends have been eating salads for 3 months, and that is all we can eat” the man and his crew said this at the same time. “ Prep the turkey, we don’t want anybody hurt, but we are going off the wagon tonight!!!” The man said. Food would be everywhere. We would have ambulances getting ready for all the casualties. The next day. “ They all of our supplies” I said (door swings open) “O no” I say. TO BE CONTINUED...
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DeleteIf I owned a resturant I would…
ReplyDeleteFirst, I would build it in the ocean, maybe somewhere off the coast of Costa Rica. I would give diving gear to the guests because obiously you need oxygen. Second, all the food would be at least $50.00 because of inflation/ prices getting higher over the years. Third, my restuarant would be called “ incagnito” because hackers will steal our name.. I honestly do not really know!
Anyway fourth, anybody who came would get a chance to win a Lamborghini Hurican! All they would have to do would do is go to our website: Incagnito, CostaRica@overpricedfood.org
That would be my restuarant!
If I opened up a restaurant its name would be Grill Out. I would serve BBQ, cheese burgers, hot dogs, steak, chicken, and ribs. From the outside my restaurant would look like a normal restaurant, but when you walk in, the entire place would be lit up with LED lights! The lights would be everywhere on the roof and on the wall!This restaurant would be located in LA, TN, TX, and NY. That iss wat mey restaurant would be like!
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ReplyDeleteThe name of my restaurant is cafe de unicorna
We would serve pink and rainbow food (mostly with food die)and the place would be decorated with sparkles,glitter,rainbows, gummy bears,and anything else you can think of that unicorns like.its deserts are cupcakes,edible glitter cookies,edible slime(trust me it's a real thing), cake,ice cream,lava cakes,dome cakes,whipped cream,brownies,and blondies.this restaurant is every place in the world.
If I had a restaurant I would name is Billy´s hamburgers. It would have different kinds hamburgers that you can eat like cheeseburgers,hamburgers with ham. It worst than Mcdonald's. It would make you fat as a pig. I would put my store next to Mcdonald in Brentwood,TN but mind will go world wide. Please come down to Billy´s hamburgers and get fat!
ReplyDeleteIf I could open a restaurant I would name it Pepper’s . It would have an all you can eat buffet with mexican food. It would have waterfalls , fountains and LED lights surrounding it . You would sit and eat on the porches and rooftop. It would have a five star rating .
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ReplyDeleteIf I owned a restaurant it would be called Ava’s Kitchen. It would have fresh juices and acai bowls. We would play tropical music,and it would look like a small shop with a lot of colors. It would be located in Nashville, Tn. If I had this restaurant would be awesome and everyone would come twice a day.
If I had a place like a restaurant, it will be called J.J.’s Sweet. It would be a candy store with ice cream. My store would be all around the world. It would have 3 level floors. The first floor will be the entrance,and you can pick what you want at the candy shop. The second floor would be like a playroom only for toddlers. The 3 floor could be only for all the older kids. Sometimes there could be a family room. Can't wait.
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