Read Game 6 poems, Do You Carrot All for Me? and The Castle in the Fire. Answer each question below. Remember to explain WHY you chose the winner based on poet's craft (rhyme, line breaks, punctuation, simile/metaphor, word choice, repetition) AND your personal connection to the meaning. Don't forget to write with M.I.N.T.S.!
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1. What is the meaning of the first poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
2. What is the meaning of the second poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
3. Based on the criteria, which poem did you choose and WHY?
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The first poem, Roger The Dog, is about a dog who is very lazy and won't get up. He uses all of his strength to eat food, so this dog is not the healthy type.
The second poem, The Falling Star, is about a boy who spots a shooting star falling through the sky and explains that it is priceless, memorable, and to be forever gone out of his life.
I think that the winner is the poem, The Falling Star. The reason I chose this poem is because it has great imagery, like when the woman stated,"Blinding the north as it went by". Another reason I chose this poem is the author uses the rhyme scheme: AA BB CC. This makes the poem fun to read and gives it a rhythm.
I think The Castle in the Fire is about someone who is describing what they had seen in a castle. I think Do you Carrot all for me is about someone who is saying that they love they other person but they are saying it with words that are vegetables. My winner is Do you Carrot all for me because I really liked how it used personification in the whole poem. I also like how the author put in the words that are vegetables. That's why I choose this poem.
ReplyDeleteI think that Do you carrot all for me is about a man who wants to marry a woman, but on the other hand the woman does not love the man. I LOVED the way the poet used food to describe the woman, and his feelings.
ReplyDeleteI think that the Castle in the fire is about a prince and a princess riding together in a fight with a dragon. All of a sudden, you cannot see the couple or the dragon, and all you see is a cloud of smoke. I thought the rhyme scheme of this poem was ABCB.
My favorite poem was probably Do you carrot all for me. I loved it because it had some great humor, and the way the poet used the food for describing words was great. that is why it was my favorite.
I think The Castle In The Fire is about somone watching a fire - breathing dragon spit fire onto the ground where a lady is standing, meanwhile, a knight rides by on his horse, battling the dragon, and rescues the woman, and comes rushing out from the fire. I think Do You Carrot All For Me is about about someone being in love with someone else, who does not love them back, and using the names of fruits and veggies to say it. My favorite of the two is Do You Carrot All For Me?, because I thought it was funny and very creative. I also thought the author's use of personification very good!
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DeleteI think that Do You Carrot All For Me is about a person that wants to marry someone. The person describes the other person by using food, for example the author says your turnip nose.
ReplyDeleteI think The Castle In The Fire is about is about a princes that sees a dragon and she sees a prince. The prince saves her and all of a sudden they both can't see the dragon or castle as they ride away.
My winner is Do You Carrot For Me. I chose it because I really liked how the author described the person with food. I also chose it because I could imagine it.
I think do you carrot all for me is about a man who wants a girl to marry her but she does not like him. I really liked how it used food instead of words. I also liked the personification. I think the castle in the clouds is about someone describing what the castle looks like after fighting the dragon.I thought the rhyme scheme was ABCB. My favorite was Do you carrot for me because I liked the personification I also liked how the used food for word. I could picture the image in my head.
ReplyDeleteI think that Do you Carrot all for Me is really about someone trying to ask someone to marry them using fruits and vegetables describing the other person. I did not really like this poem because it was short and did not seem like it would take long or much thought to write it.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in The Fire is about a prince who is going to save a princess from her castle that has been caught on fire from a dragon. This reminds me of many fairytales you may have heard when you were little or from a Disney movie. I liked this poem the best because it described a story more.
I think that Do You Carrot All For Me is about a man who loved someone, and wants to marry her. But the women does not love the man. The author describes the women as food.
ReplyDeleteI think that The Castle In The Fire is about a prince and princess riding on a dragon in a fight... All of a sudden, you cannot see the two of them or the dragon. A cloud of smoke has appeared and covered everything up. I noticed the rhyme scheme was abcb.
My favorite was do you carrot all for me because it I enjoyed the way the author describes the women as food. It was very funny. That is why I chose do you carrot for me.
I think do you carrot all for me is about some that thanks one of their friends does not carrot for them.
ReplyDeleteI think The castle in the fire is about two dragons guarding a castle.
I like the castle in the fire more because of how well the authors imagery was done.
I think that Do You Carrot For Me is about a man that has fallen in love with a girl and the man is asking if the girl if she loves him, and he is telling her that he loves her. There are three metaphors in this poem.
ReplyDeleteI think that The Castle In The Fire is about a lady who gets trapped by dragons in a castle and a brave knight comes to save her.
Both of these poems were great, but I liked Do You Carrot Me better. I liked Do You Carrot Me better because it had three metaphors and I liked the way the author used vegetables instead of describing words to describe the girl.
I think that the first poem,Do you carrot at all for me was about, A vegdable asking another veggie to marry him.
ReplyDeleteI think that The castle in the fire is about a fire breathing dragon who makes a fire in the castle.
My favarite is do you carrot for me at all. I liked it because it fitts my sense of hummer.
I think Do you carrot all for me? is about either a veggie asking another veggie to marry him, or it is about a person asking a girl to marry him using the names of different fruits and veggies.
ReplyDeleteI think that The Castle in the Fire is about someone who sees a castle and then sees a window open a little bit, then sees a lady's face. While they were watching the lady, all of a sudden they see a knight on a horse. After that the people see the back log come crashing down, and the knight starts to fight a dragon. Thankfully, no one gets killed.
My winner is Do you carrot all for me? because I thought it was really funny that the author used the names of different fruits and veggies. I also liked how the author used personification.
I think Do you Carrot at All for Me? is about a person using food puns to entertain and ask someone to marry him.
ReplyDeleteI think Castle in the Fire is about a princess and a brave knight. The knight goes to fight a dragon and save the princess.
I liked Castle in the Fire is the winner because it has a real sense of heart and meaning. It also had great rhyming.
I think do you carrot at all for me is about a person who wants another person to like them but it says every sentence by using foods.
ReplyDeleteI think Castle in the fire is about a knight who is fighting a dragon and wins the battle.
My winner is... Do you carrot all for me!! because I thought it was really funny how they used foods for words.
I think that Castle In The fire was about a person who feel in love with a princess. So he went to her castle to save her from a dragon. When he went to see her a knight came, because he had also feel in love with the princess so they had a fight but at the end the knight won the princesses heart. I liked how the author used a rhyme scheme of ABCB on each line.
ReplyDeleteI think that Do You Carrot All For Me? Is about a person asking someone to marry them by using all different kinds of veggies. I thought the author was very creative by using veggies instead of someone just asking will you marry me.
I liked Do You Carrot All For Me? I thought it was a lot more enjoyable to read and a very very cute poem.
I think do you carrot all for me was about a boy who asked a girl to marry her. He used fruits and vegetables. I think the castle on fire is about a knight who is fighting a dragon. In the end, it is very heroic and the knight wins.
ReplyDeleteMy winner is... Do you carrot all for me. I liked how it had a humor with the fruits and vegetables.
I think do you carrot all for me? is about a person who wants another person to like them using fruits and veggies for other words.
ReplyDeleteI think the castle in the fire is about a knight slaying a dragon to save the princess in the castle guarded by a dragon.
My winner is do you carrot all for me? because I thought it was funny and clever to use foods for words.
I think Do You Carrot All For Me is about a person using names of food to entertain you and ask someone to marry him.
ReplyDeleteI think the Castle in the Fire is about a knight saving a princess from a castle and the knight fighting a dragon.
My favorite is Do You Carrot All for Me because I think the author of the poem made a great short meaningful poem.
Do You Carrot All For Me was about a guy asking a girl if she cared for him,but in progress the guy uses food to make it sound silly.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in The Fire was mainly about a dragon who had captured a princess,and then a knight comes to save the princess.The dragon and the knight have a big battle,and in the end the knight won.
I liked Do You Carrot All For Me.I chose this poem because I thought it was funny how the author used foods that sounded like the real words you would use
I think Do You Carrot All For Me? Is about a boy trying to ask a girl to marry him. I also liked how the author used fruits and vegetables Finally I spoted three metophors in the poem.
ReplyDeleteI think The Castle In The Fire is about a night savig a princess from a castle that is burning from a dragon and the night is fighting the dragon to save the princess.
My favorite is... Do You Carrot All For Me? because I thing the author of the poem made it really meaningful also I really enjoyed all the personification the author used I could feel like I was in the scene. That is why I choose Do You Carrot All For Me.
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ReplyDeleteI think that The castle in the Fire is about a princess and a prince who were just riding on a dragon in the middle of a fight and then you could not see ether of the prince or the princess or the dragon because of the big black smoke in the air.
ReplyDeleteI think that do you carrot all for me is about a person asking them to get married naming different vestibules.For example he used lettuce marry. my favorite is do you carrot all for me because it is very funny and creative.
In Do You carrot all for me?, the author is stating something like a proposal. The only thing that is different, is that the anonymous author uses fruits and vegetables instead of regular words. For example, "If we cantaloupe," it really means "we can't elope (get married)".
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a knight rescuing a lady from a burning castle. The author describes a lady in a castle, waiting to be saved.
I think that the winner poem is The Castle in the Fire. I prefer this poem because it is serious and romantic. It has a rhyme scheme of ABCB that flows evenly. The words in this poem have more meaning to me than the silly words in Do You carrot all for me?.
I think Do You Carrot All About Me is about two vegetables who want to get married and the author in making vegetables substitute words from an original poem. I think The Castle in Fire is about a person rescuing someone from a castle it also written in a, b, a, b and rhymed. I choose Do You Carrot All For Me because it was funny and it is like a proposal.
ReplyDeleteI think Do you carrot all for me is a love poem with vegetable names put in instead of two words. For example: care at = carrot. The Castle in the Fire is about dragons that guard an enchanted castle. I noticed a rhyme pattern of: AA.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite is Do you carrot all for me because I loved the creative vegetable names.
I think Do you carrot all for me is about someone who is in love with someone and
ReplyDeletehe wants to marry her I liked how they used fruits and vegetable names.I think The castle in the fire is about 2 dragons who gurd the castle.I liked do you carrot all for because it used funny vegetable names.
I think Castle In The Fire is about a dragon gurading a princess in a tower but then the knight comes to save her. I liked it because it really told a story.
ReplyDeleteCarrot All For Me is about a man who puts veggies into his sentences to express how he felt about someone. I really liked this because it was very fun to read.
I choose Carrot All For Me because I liked the way all the veggies came together as sentences. I also liked the story it told. That is why I liked Carrot All For Me.
I Think that Do You Carrot All For Me is about a boy asking out a girl in a funny way. I liked how the author used vegetables and fruits instead of the words that should be there. I Think The Castle In The Fire is about a princess stuck in the castle when the castle is under attack. And the brave knight comes to save her.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite is Do You Carrot All For Me.I like how the author uses vegteables instead of the real words.
I Think that Do You Carrot All For Me is about a boy asking out a girl in a funny way. I liked how the author used vegetables and fruits instead of the words that should be there. I Think The Castle In The Fire is about a princess stuck in the castle when the castle is under attack. And the brave knight comes to save her.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite is Do You Carrot All For Me.I like how the author uses vegteables instead of the real words.