Dear students,
Write at least a 5 sentence paragraph answering the following prompt:
You’re a scientist who has just discovered a new planet. In one year, people will be coming to live on it. What will your planet be like? What will you name your planet? Write a paragraph describing your new planet.
Be sure to include:
- a topic sentence
- supporting details
- complete sentences
- correct spelling, capitalization (M.I.N.T.S.), and end punctuation.
- a closing sentence
Here is an example of an advanced/proficient post:
If I discovered a new planet, I would call it Awesomya! It would be made of sand, water, and gushers. You could swim and play all day, and then you could go to Gushers Island and eat. Also, they would serve normal water and healthy food too, so you could survive.There would be animals on the planet, and they would be really fuzzy and cute. There would be no mosquitos or chiggers. People would come to Awesomeya and live there. They would develop the planet just like Earth. I would love to travel to the new planet, Awesomeya.
Happy blogging,
Mrs. Eads
Hello my name is James Bennett and I found the new planet jeffy ooh ooh . In one year people will be on my planet and it will be cool. The temperature of the palnet is always76 degrees. You also don’t need a oxygen tank. The size of the planet is as big as Tennessee and will have evrything that Tennssee has except it has a beach. There are also aleins that live on my planet so wantch out you don’t want to get captured.
ReplyDeleteSincearly, James
My planet would be called CANDYETTE. It will be entirely made out of sugar! Our five star hotel would overlook caramel lake and it would snow cotton candy every winter day. We will have rockets zooming there and back everywhere you look! It will also contain lollipop forest and gummy town. Call 999 999 9998 to book your next vacation!
ReplyDeleteVictoria the science girl.
ReplyDeleteI just discovered a new planet. I named that planet Poodlely. I named it that because everywhere you go there are poodles. I found this planet looking through my telescope when I noticed a blue planet.I hope you will like me study more about Poodlely.Lucas
If I was a scientist and i found a planet I would name it coolwordkthxbye.
ReplyDeleteThe planet would be a planet where everything would be how you want it. This would mean every person's world is different, and it would always know what you wanted the world to look like and have. My world would have a bunch of tamed elephant and beaches to swim and explore. This is what i would do with my world.
-Trey ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
You’re a scientist who has just discovered a new planet. In one year, people will be coming to live on it. What will your planet be like? What will you name your planet? Write a paragraph describing your new planet.
ReplyDeleteMy planet’s name will be acapella. My plant will have all toy shops and all toy shops only. It will have all kids no parents, and some health junk food. My planet’s color would probably be purple like this. I will probably love my planet so much that I would visit it so much that I might move there. I will never ever (x infiniti) ever move in that many years.
-kaki
If I discovered a new planet i would call it imagine and everyone could imagine what they wanted and it would pop up so you could like imagine a ocean made of coke a town made of chocolate and that is my project Knox
ReplyDeleteMy perferct planet would not have candy on it it woud be polution free and have lots of nature and unque and diffrent anamals it would have viewing sites and gardens with beutiful plants I would live i a hous on the side of a mountain and it would have a entire wall of strong glass a fire palce and a tv whith vedeo games the citys would be in the sky whith domes around them they are also able to keep the light bellow.
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If I were to discover a new planet it would be called awesomeland. You would be able to go to the water park and play. Also if you wanted to relax you could go to the beach. And finally you could go back to your awesome resort to have a good night sleep. I think you would love awesome land!
ReplyDeleteLucy Kate
If I discovered a planet I would name it Corgopolis. Everyone would get their own corgi. Corgopolis would be purple, like this. All of the stores would be full of corgi pins, corgi stuffed animals, real corgis, corgi books, corgi water bottles, and corgi sweatshirts. The grocery stores would be filled with a root that is called baqishus root. They would also have baqishus juice. It is very flavorful.
ReplyDelete~Avery
If I discovered a new planet I'd name it KFJfxqk,jvhkbhx.it would be cold. There would be no light on planet KFJfxqk,jvhkbhx. IT would be snowing. There would be hail. Also, rigged click the cookie.
ReplyDeletePatrick
If I discovered a new planet I would name it BLIZard. It would have no rules and no people under 15. There would be dogs, cats, pigs, unicorns, pandas, and foxes. The only food there would be are mashed potatoes, brownies, burgers, salads, fries, soda, and milkshakes, candy, and ice cream. There would be no rules no matter what. That’s what my new planet would be like.
ReplyDeleteLiz
If I discovered a planet, I would call it GameLand. I love to play games, but some people may not, so there are a few options to choose from:
ReplyDelete1. Play any game you like
2. Watch any movie you like(for free)
3. Have a sleepover
4. Go to the pool
5. Read
6. Make up your own activity
That way, everyone would be happy because they could do whatever they wanted!!
Abbie