You will need to read Roger the Dog and Do you carrot all for me?
Your response needs to be a paragraph with at least 3 sentences, but you do not need to summarize the meaning of the poems. Instead, your response should include the following information:
- Which poem's meaning is more important to you?
- What personal connection can you make?
- Which poet's craft do you enjoy more? Poet's craft can include repetition, word choice, rhyme, simile/metaphor, etc.
I think that the poem Do You Carrot All For Me has a deeper meaning because the poem is proposing to someone, but using word play.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection to Roger the Dog. Most of the time I am lazy, and just want to watch YouTube and TV or play Fortnite.
I think Do You Carrot All For Me has better writers craft. The poem had Word play, for example, My heart beets for you. The poem also had Imagery, for example, Lettuce marry.
I chose Roger the Dog as the winner.
good choice
DeleteThe poem, “Roger The Dog,” has a deeper meaning to me because some people can be lazy couch potatoes and they do not do anything in their whole entire life. Just chips, coke, hershey, repeat… It is kind of sad to think about.
ReplyDeleteI can make a bigger connection to the poem, “Roger The Dog,” because my grandma when she is not visiting us or our cousins in New Hampshire, she always watches the Big Bang Theory. Like she can not stop watching it! It’s crazy!
For the poem, “Roger The Dog,” the poem uses a rhyme scheme and similes. The poem has a rhyme scheme of: AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH! Some examples of similes: “Like a miner, into sleep.” So for the poem, “Do You Carrot All For Me,” the poem uses imagery and word play. Some examples for word play: “Lettuce marry.” Then for imagery it describes how the vegetables look like his/her boyfriend/girlfriend. I am going to have to choose, “Do You Carrot All For Me,” for writer’s craft.
The poem, “Roger The Dog,” has a deeper meaning to me because some people can be lazy couch potatoes and they do not do anything in their whole entire life. Just chips, coke, hershey, repeat… It is kind of sad to think about.
ReplyDeleteI can make a bigger connection to the poem, “Roger The Dog,” because my grandma when she is not visiting us or our cousins in New Hampshire, she always watches the Big Bang Theory. Like she can not stop watching it! It’s crazy!
For the poem, “Roger The Dog,” the poem uses a rhyme scheme and similes. The poem has a rhyme scheme of: AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH! Some examples of similes: “Like a miner, into sleep.” So for the poem, “Do You Carrot All For Me,” the poem uses imagery and word play. Some examples for word play: “Lettuce marry.” Then for imagery it describes how the vegetables look like his/her boyfriend/girlfriend. I am going to have to choose, “Do You Carrot All For Me,” for writer’s craft.
I choose, “Roger The Dog,” as the winner!
Roger the Dog, has a more important meaning to me. I like how the meaning is about a lazy dog who won’t do anything.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection to Roger the dog, because my dog is really lazy too.
I like Roger the dog’s writer’s craft the most, because this poem used a rhyme scheme. F or example, it said Romp and chomp, it also said Dog and log.
I choose Roger the Dog, as the winner.
I think the poem ROGER THE DOG has a better meaning to me because the owner loved his dog and the dog loved his owner. So it spoke to me the most because i’m a dog person.
ReplyDeleteI used to have a dog who would do nothing but sleep, eat, and get loved. He did this because he was really, really, really, old. And he loved me and I loved him.
I choose ROGER THE DOG as the winner because it used great rhyme scheme of (aabbaabb.) also it used couplets for the lines. For example, it used 8 lines divide 8 by 2 and you get four!
The meaning of Do You Carrot All For Me is that maybe someone is saying that someone else doesn’t seem like they don’t care for them and someone is asking if they do.
ReplyDeleteMy connection with Roger the Dog is that I used to have a dog exactly like that. He would always eat and sleep and take naps every single minute, hour, and day of his life (except when he was young).
I choose Roger the Dog. I like the personification because you can’t bake your head in the oven. I also like the rhyme scheme because it goes AABBCC and I like how it repeats itself three times.
Roger The Dog is more meaningful to me. I have my own dog and he follows my mom around so she can feed him. I love dogs and my dog loves to lay by the fire when he is not playing or eating.
ReplyDeleteI have a connection with Roger. I love to sleep. Like once I feel asleep while my babysitter was here and I wouldn't get up(that was a dream, I think?”. Roger is awesome so I hope you pick him.
I saw rhyme scheme when it said”ease (line 1)fleas(line 2)I saw repetition when it said”He(line 2,line 3,line 5,line 8,line 10,line 12,13,14,15.
I have a better meaning to Roger the dog because I used to have a dog and I loved him just like in the poem
ReplyDeleteI also have a connection with Roger the Dog because I had a dog and I loved him just like in the poem
How to eat a poem has better writer's craft because it has imagery, because it said stuff with food and a relationship in between them so it relly made a picture in your mind.:)
the winner is Roger the Dog
Another writer's craft is it has rhyme scheme and it is AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH
DeleteRoger the dog is about a dog who is lazy and does not use any energy for play or exercise. The only thing his energy goes into is a good meal and having 5 pounds gained. This poem has a strong meaning to me.
ReplyDeleteI made a connection with do you carrot all for me because I like to use plays on words.
I choose roger the dog as the winner because it had a stronger meaning. I thought the other poem was sort of lame. I saw the poem use similes. It used similes when it said “like a miner , into sleep.”
I think Roger the Dog means more because it is about a dog that doesn’t break routine and justs eat, sleeps, go to the bathroom, repeat. If you knew someone that lived like that I would feel pretty sad for them because all they did were the things you had to do, but they are not outside working at a job or playing with their friends.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection to Roger the Dog because one of my dogs just eats, maybe sometimes play or have fun, sleep, bathroom, and repeat. She is so adorable, bu she just sits on her butt all day, and expects us to pet her or scratch her. So that is why I can make a connection to Roger the Dog.
I like the writer’s craft in both but I really like the writer’s craft in Roger the Dog, the writer’s craft is the couplets EX: Asleep he wheezes at his ease,
He only wakes to scratch his fleas, That was the writer’s craft I
Liked
Roger the dog wins
Roger The Dog has a stronger meaning to me because I have a dog and It is lazy like Rger but that does not mean that they are bad. Dogs have a lot of differences with humans. Dogs are so lazy that they make you do everything for the except them just snagging your food from us,witch they love.
ReplyDeleteRoger The Dog has a connection with me because I have two dogs and they are the same way. Dogs if they see food they will definitely go attack it.
I think that Roger The Dog Has better writers craft because the imagery ,I can see a dog being lazy and making people doing everything for them. I also like` the alliteration with what it is telling you in a list.
I choose Roger The Dog!!!!!
DeleteI think Do You Carrot All For Me has a deeper meaning. It’s about a man talking to the woman that he loves. He is saying he will always love her so I think it means to never resent the people you love.
ReplyDeleteI have a connection with Roger the Dog. I have a dog who is really lazy and she doesn’t like to move and she always sleeps.
I like the writer’s craft in Roger the Dog. The rhyme scheme is aabbccddeeffgg. It also has a simile. “ Like a miner into sleep,” is comparing Roger to a miner
I chose Roger the Dog as the winner.
My winner is Do you carrot at all for me. It means more to to me.
ReplyDeleteI have a connection to it because i used to play with my food and one time at lunch at my old school we were playing food puppet and we got on someone when he was walking by heb got mad at us threw food at us missed it hit someone and it was a great FOODFIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
For the writer's craft it had Rhyme scheme, and personification.
I like Roger The Dog because it means a lot to me. Like when the dog only moves to eat his food. That makes sense because if it never moves, the only exercise you can make him do is eat food. Tell him is food is ready, he’ll come in the kitchen, get his food, and boom, he starts to move. Also, when it starts moving, from another end of the room, tell him his other food is ready because he’ll come from one end of the foom to the other. But if you do it to many times, your dog will get fat, so, take his food outside with you, and make him run after you for his food. You’ll soon realize how fast your dog is. Finally train him to where if he runs a lap around your street, he gets dog food or lasagna.
ReplyDeleteI also like Roger The Dog because I connect to it. First of all, when I play video games, Like Fortnite, I tell my mom to make me noodles, and when I do, I just sit and do nothing waiting for my noodles! Second of all, if i’m playing on my ipod and i’m hungry, I only move to get a bag of doritos. Third of all, if i’m just sitting on the couch after playing outside like normal, I ask for some ice cream and I don’t move a muscle to do so. Finally, at dinner, when I need something to drink, I ask my mom or dad to get me something to drink. Sometimes i’m very lazy like Roger The Dog, so that is why I connect to him.
The writer’s craft in Roger The dog is rhyme scheme. The rhyme scheme goes like aabb. The second type of writer’s craft is similes because in one part of the story it says, “ You can lug him like a log.” and that is the writer’s craft for Roger The Dog.
I choose Roger The Dog as the winer!!! Wha hoo!!
Roger the dog is the most meaningful . because I used to have a chocolate lab but he died because he got super lazy and did not eat.
ReplyDeleteI can connect to this because I have a pug and naturally he is super fat so he just sits on the couch all day. Also he does not like to run a lot the only time he runs is when we give him a chew toy.
One writer's craft is couplets because it has two lines in each paragraph. Another writer's craft is repetition because it says dog a lot. I also noticed that every word at the end of each sentence rhymes in that paragraph.
Roger the Dog has a bigger meaning to me because I like how it is about a dog that is very lazy.
ReplyDeleteI have a connection to Roger the Dog because I am lazy sometimes and love to lay down next to The fire and get warm. Also, I like to bake my head next to the fire just like the line in the poem.
I like the writer's craft in Roger the Dog more because I like the imargy when it says bakes \ his head by the fire.Also,I like the rime scheme of AABBCC that is also couplets.
I pick Roger the Dog as the winner.
Do you Carrot All For ce has a deeper meaning because in real life people care for me and make sure I am having a good day.
ReplyDeleteOne connection I can make with the story is when my friends do something nice to me. And I can tell that they have feeling for me.
The DO YOU CARROT ALL FOR ME has two writer’s craft. One was a metaphor,for example”you are a peach. The next one was personification.
The poem,” Do You Carrot All For Me” is the one that I made a connection with because I love puns and this poem is completely full of them. Also, it was quite funny!
ReplyDelete“Do You Carrot All For Me “is also the one that I thought had the deeper meaning because even though it’s funny, it’s talking about someone asking someone else if they love them.
“Do You Carrot All For Me” is the one that I thought had better poet’s craft. For example, it used a metaphor when it said “With your turnip nose” because it’s saying that someone’s nose is a turnip. Also, it used personification when it said “Lettuce marry” because we all know that lettuce can’t marry.
"Do You Carrot All For Me" is the winner!
The first poem Roger the dog is more meaningful to me because I have a dog that is puny and I do not want my dog to end up like Roger the dog! The second poem I can relate to because my parents are together and married. The winner is… Roger the dog because it has good imagery. For example it says he works as hard as you thing finishing his dinner plate. It also has good rhyme scheme. For example it says He hogs the fire, he bakes his head. As if it were a loaf of bread.
ReplyDeleteI choose Roger the dog.
I can connect with Roger The Dog because my dog is starting to get lazy, and it also eats a lot.
ReplyDeleteDo you carrot all for me Had good imagery. The picture was a wife and a husband talking.
I choose Roger The Dog because it had very good imagery for example, It was a lazy dog that would not go anywhere. It also had a steady Rhyme scheme.
I choose Roger The Dog.
I think Roger The Dog is better because I have a dog and I love it so much and if any thing happened to it I would get so mad I would be looking for it intel my heart beats no more.
ReplyDeleteThe writers craft in Roger The Dog is a really good rhyme scheme when it says,”Asleep he whizzes at his ease. He only wakes to scratch his fleas. It also has onomatopia when it says chomp.
I chose roger the dog says jackson
DeleteI think Roger The Dog has more meaning to it because it is about a dog and I have a dog that is like that to. He loves food especially the food we eat.
ReplyDeleteRoger The Dog has more of a connection with me because I have a dog that acts like Roger and my dog loves food it is his favorite thing in the world other then sleeping.
I like the poem Roger The Dog’s writers craft more because it has a good rhyme scheme it is AA BB CC DD EE FF GG HH. Also there is
Alliteration for example: he flops flat and Digs Down Deep. then there is imagery for example: when it says you can roll him with your foot, I can imagine someone rolling a dog over with there foot that would be really funny. Then there is onomatopoeia when it says Chomp that is onomatopoeia.
I chose Roger The Dog as the winner.
Do You Carrot All For Me has a better meaning because it uses wordplay in a love poem. It is very entertaining and fun to read. I think it turned a boring love poem into a funny wordplay poem.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection with Roger the Dog because it is about a lazy dog, and I have two of those, but they put a lot of energy into eating. It is very fun to read.
Roger the Dog has the best poet’s craft because… It uses couplets.
For example: Then flops flat, and digs down deep, like a minor into sleep.
I also uses… Alliteration when it says: digs down deep, and dinner dish.
I choose …………………………………………..Do You Carrot All For Me
I like your thinking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteThe poem Do You Carrot All For Me is more meaningful because it is about love and is a proposal.
ReplyDeleteI can connect to the poem Roger The Dog because I am very lazy and just want to lay around.
I like the writer's craft in the poem Do You Carrot All For Me. The rhyme scheme is ABCDEF etc. I like the metaphors like “your turnip nose”, and “you are a peach”.
I also like the personification “lettuce marry” because it is silly.
I choose Do You Carrot All For Me as the winner.
I THINK THE POEM, DO YOU CARROT ALL FOR ME, HAD THE DEEPER MEANING.
ReplyDeleteIT’S A LOVE LETTER AND THEY WERE REALLY SHOWING HOW MUCH THEY CARE FOR THE OTHER PERSON.
I MADE A CONNECTION WITH THE POEM, ROGER THE DOG. THE DAY WE PUT MY DOG DOWN SHE COULD BARELY STAND UP IT WAS VERY SAD.
I LIKED THE POET’S CRAFT OF, DO YOU CARROT ALL FOR ME, MORE. I LIKED HOW THE POEM WAS FULL OF METAPHORS, FOR EXAMPLE, “ MY HEART BEATS FOR YOU.”
I ALSO LIKED THE PERSONIFICATION, FOR EXAMPLE, “ LETTUCE MARRY,” LETTUCE CAN’T MARRY. ALL THESE THINGS MAKE ME THINK THAT DO YOU CARROT ALL FOR ME, HAD THE BETTER POETS CRAFT.
I CHOOSE ROGER THE DOG AS THE WINNER:)
I like the poem, Roger the Dog because it is funny and meaningful to me. This poem is very cute and reminds me of my pets.
ReplyDeleteI can make a conection to this poem. This poem reminds me when my dog was very sick and didn’t want to play or run. It also reminds me of when some of my pets are lazy and won’t do anything but eat.
I chose Roger the Dog as the winner because it is a very cute and funny poem. Overall, I think Roger the Dog is a great, funny poem. It uses a rhyme scheme and couplets. For example, It says, ‘Asleep he weezes at his ease. He only wakes to scratch his fleas. These are the reasons that I chose Roger the Dog as my winner.
P.S. I also chose this poem because dogs are cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I think that Do You Carrot All For Me has a deeper meaning to me. For example, it means even if someone doesn’t talk to you doesn’t mean that they do not like you. Also, it means that do people care about you.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection with Roger The Dog. For example, I have a friend named Camden and her dog is on a diet and is lazy, and he eats to much food.
A writer’s craft they used in Roger The Dog is rhyme scheme . For example, it goes AABBCCDD… Another writer’s craft is similes. For example, it says you can lug him like a log. I choose Roger The Dog as the winner.
I think Do you carrot all for me? Has a deeper meaning because someone is showing there emotions with fruit and veggies.
ReplyDeleteOne connection I have with Roger the Dog is that my dog is really really fat and lazy like Roger.
I chose Roger the Dog for my poem because it has lots of writers craft like it is writen in couplets for example You can roll him with your foot he will stay snoring where he is put also it has a rhyme scheme of AABBCCDD.
I chose Roger the Dog.
The poem Roger the Dog means more to me because my dog eats a lot and is getting kind of lazy now. And it says that Roger is very lazy.
ReplyDeleteI have a connection with Roger the Dog because my dog eats a ton and he is getting lazy. And sometimes I’m really lazy at my house.
I feel like Roger the Dog has more writer’s craft. I really like the imagery example, when Roger is sitting by the fire. I also like another piece of imagery example, when Roger is not running but trying to sleep.
I choose Roger The DOG
I think that Roger the Dog has a more important meaning because dogs are big things in people’s lives, even lazy ones.
ReplyDeleteI had a connection with this poem, too. I used to have a dog that acted a bit like Roger. He was always sleeping.
In my opinion, Roger the Dog had better poet’s craft. I liked the similes. For example, the author stated,”Then he’ll dig down deep, like a miner, into sleep.” I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme because the author never went back to the same rhyming sound. The pattern was AABBCCDD and so on. Roger the Dog amazing poet’s craft.
Roger the Dog has a more important meaning to me because I really like dogs, and I think the poem is really funny. For example, it says, “He’ll work as hard as you wish emptying his dinner dish. The poem Do You Carrot all for me I think is very weird.
ReplyDeleteI have a connection with Roger The Dog because my dog is sometimes very lazy. For example, my dog lays on his bed until when we say, “food,” and he jumps straight up and starts digging in to his food. Another connection with Roger The Dog is that my dog doesn't like taking walks too.
I really liked the poet’s craft for Roger the dog. One of the poet’s craft was imagery because the poem really paints a picture in my mind when it says, “He’s just a sack of snoring dog. You can lug him like a log. Another imagery for Roger the Dog is when he says, “He will not race, he will not romp, he saves his strength for gobble and chomp.
My connection with Roger The Dog is when I was at my cousin’s house he has a dog that is really old and all he does is eat and sleep. Whence we put the dog on the trampoline and he just slept on the side.
ReplyDeleteI think Do You carrot All For Me is more meaningful because it is about how someone loves someone and is describing how they look using vegetables.
I think Roger The Dog has the best writer’s craft. It has rhyme scheme in it. For example, The rhyme scheme for the first stanza is A, A, B, B. Also it has imagery in it. For example I can imagine the dog just sleeping all day and just eating.
I choose Roger the Dog as the winner. It is more meaningful because I love the fact that dogs are lousy and I love how the owner tries and tries and tries.
ReplyDeleteI have a connectoin with Roger the Dog because I have a pretty lazy dog as well.
The writers craft is great in Roger the Dog. The Rhyme Skeme is AA BB CC DD EE FF GG HH. Witch is also in couplets. It has alliteration for an digs dow deep.
The poem that I have a better connection with is Roger The Dog because I have dogs too, both can be lazy and hiper. My dog ( Ellie ) is very hyper but very old and tiny and she loves to sit by the fire and eat my other dog ( winter )’s food. Winter is very very hyper, he is 2 years old, loves to run and play, and loves to eat my cat’s food.
ReplyDeleteThe poem that is more meaningful to me is Mother to Son because it talks about not giving up and not looking back. I also like that it means to persevere and that the mom is still positive even though she has had a hard time.
The poem that has the better writers craft is Roger the Dog because it has couplets, rhyme scheme, alliteration, and similes. There is couplets when the poem reads, “ He will not race, he will not romp, he saves his strength for gobble and chomp.” The rhyme scheme is AABBCCDD etc. There is alliteration when the poem says “ Digs down deep” and “Dinner dish.” There is similes when the poem reads “ As if it were a loaf of bread.”
The poem that I like better is Mother to Son because it means to persevere and I think that is a good reminder to keep going and never look back.
I choose Mother to Son as the winner.