You will need to read Roger the Dog and Do you carrot all for me? or Roger the Dog and How to Eat a Poem.
Your response needs to be a paragraph with at least 3 sentences, but you do not need to summarize the meaning of the poems. Instead, your response should include the following information:
- Which poem's meaning is more important to you?
- What personal connection can you make?
- Which poet's craft do you enjoy more? Poet's craft can include repetition, word choice, rhyme, simile/metaphor, etc.
I think roger the dog has a good meaning because it shows that it is ok to be lazy.
ReplyDeleteI connect to roger the dog because I have a dog who is sometimes lazy.
I think do you carrot all for me has a good writer's craft because it takes normal words and replaces them with vegetables that sound alike.
I choose roger the dog!
Roger the dog has a small meaning: it’s meaning is that it is okay to be lazy sometimes. I think that that is correct in some cases but you should also be active.
ReplyDeleteDo you carrot all me is a poem that I can not really relate with because it is about someone using vegetables to talk about someone else, who is not me. I think that I can really relate to roger the dog because I am lazy too.
My winner is Roger the dog because it is a poem I can relate to. I really liked the imagery in it and I could really imagine roger laying down and staying there like a rock.
You picked the right one!
DeleteI think the meaning of Roger the Dog is better. It is about a dog who is very lazy and snores. And he likes to eat.
ReplyDeleteI have a connection with Roger the Dog. I love dogs and I have a very lazy one who love to eat.
I like the writer's craft of Do you Carrot all for me. It uses imagery like when it says a food I think of that food.
I choose Roger the Dog as my winner.
Well said buddy
DeleteThe poem, Do you carrot all for me, has more of a meaning to me. It means that you can describe something as something different no one would think of.
ReplyDeleteI have a connection with Roger the dog. The connection is I sometimes don’t feel like getting up and I don’t put much energy into somethings.
Do you carrot all for me has line that have almost the same amount of syllables 4-7. Also, it has imagery that makes you imagine someone that is made from fruits and vegetables. Finally, it is a poem that can just make you laugh.
I choose Do you carrot all for me?
I like the meaning of “Do You Carrot All For Me?”, because it talks about how he is professing his love to her, while using vegetables.
ReplyDeleteI have a connection with “Roger the Dog”, because I like to be lazy sometimes. I can understand what it is like to just lay at home.
I like the writer’s craft of “Roger the Dog”, because of the rhyme scheme. For example, AA BB CC DD. It rhymes every paragraph.
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I chose "Roger the Dog" as my winner.
DeleteI have a better connection with Rodger The Dog because sometimes I fell like a dog. I feel lazy like Rodger is. Also, I am always hungry hust like Rodger! My faviort part is when it says, “He hogs the fire, he bakes his head As if it were a loaf of bread.”
ReplyDeleteI think Rodger the dog as a better meaning beacuse it is about a sweet dog. It explains a day of a dog. In this case, Rodger. Also, I just think it has a better meaning to me.
I like Rodger The Dog better than Choosing Shoes because I love dogs! He is so lazy just like me. Also, I love how it tells the story.
I choose Rodger the Dog as the winner.
I think Roger the dog has a better meaning because it is okay to be lazy and not everybody is energetic and ready to run. Roger is a very calm and lazy dog.
ReplyDeleteI think do you carrot all for me has better writers craft. I like how you could use imagery really well. I also like the personification. They have words from fruits and vegetables and made them into real life. For example, “ My heart beets for you”
I think Roger the dog has a better connection with me because my dog was exactly like that. She would never get up but only to eat her food. Sometimes she would run but not for the whole day.
I pick Roger the dog as my winner
I think the first poem, Roger the dog has a better meaning. I think the meaning is that it is okay to be lazy.
ReplyDeleteMy connection is with the first poem Roger the dog. My connection with it is that it is okay to be lazy.
I think Roger the dog has a better poem craft because it makes more sense. Also, it is very funny.
I choose Roger the Dog as the winner.
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Roger the dog has a better meaning because the writer wrote it to make people laugh and to tell people about a lazy dog.
ReplyDeleteRoger the dog is about a lazy dog that only eats and sleeps. I can make a connection to roger the dog because at home I have a really lazy dog that does not get of the couch and will only get off to eat.
I like roger the dog because it has good imagery like, He hogs the fire he bakes his head as if it were a loaf of bread. He will not run he will not romp he saves his strength for gobble and chomp.
I choose roger the dog as the winner.
The poem that has the most meaning to me is Do you carrot all for me, even though I really don’t like this poem I think it has the most meaning. I mean really when you ask someone do you care at all for me that is important.
ReplyDeleteThe poem that can make a connection with is Roger The dog, I remember my old dog Ally she was always lazy and a grump.
I pick Roger the dog as the winner, because I just really didn’t like How to eat a poem. Roger the dog has much better writers craft, it has alliteration, for example dinner dish, flops flat, and digs down deep. It also has a great rhyme scheme.
I choose “Roger the Dog” as my favorite poem because I once had a dog name Ellie and she would barely move at all, because she was like 13 years old.
ReplyDeleteI also liked this poem because I like how it shows how some people or dogs can be really lazy and some can be even lazier.
Finally, the poet’s craft in this poem is rhyming. Like when it says “You can roll him with your foot, He’ll stay snoring where he’s put.”
One other thing is that the IMAGERY, is like a dog named Roger is really, really lazy.
I choose roger the dog as my winner
The one with the most meaning to me is Roger the Dog because I love big, fat, lazy, and hairy dogs. I can use text evidence when it says, “He only wakes to scratch his fleas.”
ReplyDeleteI have a connection with Do you Carrot All For Me almost in a bad way. It uses vegetables and I absolutely hate vegetables including carrots, beets, turnips, radishes, peaches, etc.
The one with the best writer’s craft is Roger the Dog because It has great rhyme scheme. It is AA in each paragraph. It had a simile that was “You can lug him like a log.
I choose Roger the Dog to win.
I have a better meaning for roger the dog because it is okay to be lazy in my opinion.Because he eats and sleeps and runs.
ReplyDeleteMy connection is to roger the dog because my dog does the same thing when I am around.
I think the writers craft is really good like in roger the dog the Imagery. Because the pictures would be really good.
I think roger the dog wins!
I think I have a better connection with Roger The Dog because, I had a dog that did all of the things that he did.
ReplyDeleteI think that Do You Carrot All for Me has a better meaning because, it talk about a man in love with someone and he is telling her that he loves her.
I think that Do you Carrot All For Me has a better writers craft because, It uses word play for the lines. For example, My heart beets for you.
I choose… Roger the Dog
Do you carrot all for me is about people telling their love for each other. Like when he says “My heart beets for you, with your turnip nose” he is using veggies to tell someone his love .
ReplyDeleteRoger the dog is about a dog who is super lazy. I think it is funny when it says “ he will not race, he will not romp, he saves all his strength for gobble and chomp.
Roger the dog is my favorite because it funny and there is no meaningful meaning.
I think Roger is fat because when he exercises won’t do anything at all.I feel bad for Rogers owner because he probably can’t get anything done.I realised all the words rhymed.
I think Mother to Son has a more important meaning because it says not to give up and to keep trying.
ReplyDeleteI have connection with Roger the Dog because my dog also likes to sit by the fire and curl up.
I like Roger the Dog's writers craft because I noticed it has good imagery. For example, I can imagine Roger sitting by the fire with his head almost on fire.
This is why I choose Roger the Dog.