Imagine that for one day only you could have a pet monkey! What would you do with your pet? What would you name him/her? What adventures would you two have? Please describe your day with your new friend.
Remember, students, to watch out for run-ons, and to write in complete sentences. I look forward to reading your comments!
Your paragraph must…
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- written in complete sentences
- use M.I.N.T.S.
- have a topic sentence and supporting details
- have a closing sentence
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If I had a pet monkey, I would name it Bailey. If I could do anything with Bailey, I would go to the park to let her play. Of course, I would have to play too. We would mostly play at the monkey bars. Our hearts would start to pump in excitement. After that, we would go to California Pizza Kitchen. Bailey would get a big pepperoni pizza, and I would get mac and cheese. We would mainly just stay there and talk with each other. After that, we would go to the candy store and get lots of candy. Bailey would get all banana flavored candy. Finally, we would go home and snuggle up on the couch. I would read Curious George to her, and she would fall asleep in my arms. That would be my day with Bailey.
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If I could have a pet monkey for a day I would name it Pope. Pope would be a boy. We would go to McDonalds and we would both get a Big Mac. Then we would go home and play video games (While eating our big mac) and then we play with my dog. That would be a good day with Pope.
ReplyDeleteI want a day with pope to.
DeleteHave A good day POPE!!!
DeleteIf I had a monkey I would name him dobermen after my nickname. he would be crazy and awesome. he would also like ducks and coke. H would be the best monkey ever.
ReplyDeleteYou forgot the e in he.
DeleteYours was funny.
Deleteha ha ha
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name him Dopey. He would be amazing at basketball. (I hope.) I would let him go CrAZy. I would make him bars to swing on all day long. I would get him a friend when I am gone. I would go to all different places with him. He would be a great pet.
ReplyDeleteI bet that Dopey would be awesome at basketball!
DeleteBronnie want to meet his friend.
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it bobby Joe. We would play together all day everyday! I would climb trees and run around. We would eat animal crackers and I would read him Curious George! We would go to Laser Quest downtown Nashville. That is what I would do with my monkey friend Bobby Joe!!
ReplyDeleteLaser quest is fun.
Deletegood boy bobby joe
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name her Cocoa. We would have a lot of fun! We would go see other monkeys and we would go rock climbing because she would be good at that.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Bananas because it would like bananas. Me and Bananas would go to the park everyday so we are not bored in the house. Also we would have banana pudding on friday nights. Also she would have a playdate with her friend bananas. Then they will play and me and the owner will play to.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name him mr.Banana. I would dye his hair green and gold. I would take him to get ice cream. And we will also go to the park and, he would also help me with soft ball.I wish i had a pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteI like your monkey's name.
DeleteIf I had a monkey, I would name it Bronnie Jr. He would be trained to do things for me with hypnotism. I would ask him to build me a time machine, a teleporter, a potion that made me immortal, to make me rich forever, and make me president of the world. After that, I would bring him out of his trance. Then we would eat a TON of food at a buffet in Las Vegas. That concludes what I would do with a monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey for a pet it's name would be Monkey O. We would go to the park and play on the monkey bars. Then after that we would go climb a tree and play monkey. Then after that, we would go get some bananas and banana ice cream. That's what I would do if I have a monkey for a day.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey his name would be Pete. Pete would be the best. First he would get me out of school using his monkey karate. Second we would climb on top of the empire state building and meet his dad King Kong. Then we would ride on King Kong's back for hours. Then we would watch monkey cartoons all day long. After that he would go to sleep but before we go to sleep we ride rainbow monkeys and eat ice cream and then go to bed.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like you and Pete would have a great time.
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey of my own, I would name her Addie. The first thing we would do is go to the toy store, we would laugh when we put Addie on the shelve next to the stuffed monkeys because it would be hard to tell the difference between the real monkey and the stuffed ones. After we went to the toy store we would go home and get on the trampoline. Addie would be confused and wonder why she was bouncing in the air. After the trampoline we would go inside and have some ice cream while we settled down on the couch, and curl up in a warm blanket.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name him Spike. I would give Spike a mohawk. Spike and I would go all around the World to play sports. First we would stay in America and play basketball, football, and baseball. Then we would go everywhere else in the World. That is what I would do if I had a pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him dude. I would teach dude how to play lacrosse and basketball. When we were done playing we take our shoes and put paint on our feet. I would write: HAPPY BIRTHDAY! And we would go to a Mexican restraunt. Sense it was my "birthday" We would get free ice cream. When my mom put us to bed, we would sneak out and ding-dong-ditch our neighbors: the Kirklands and the McNallys. For breakfast we would have banana smoothies. Then the weekend would be over and I would go to school and miss him:(
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name him Bananas. Bananas and I would go to the park and and I would video him on the monkey bars! After we would go rent one of those double bikes except I would be the only one peddling! Next I would take him to the theater because he would be starring in Curious George the Musical. After his performance I would congratulate him with a trip to the grocery store to get banana pudding. When we got there I would get him the shopping carts with cars attached to them and we would run around the store like maniacs until the cops came! That’s what I would do if i had a pet monkey!
ReplyDeleteIf had a pet monkey I would teach it how to do the rubik’s cube and I would put him on America’s Got Talent,so if he won I would get a million dollars. I would name my monkey Ern’o Rubi’k. We would go to the mountains and hike,become famous,and much much more. THe day we would have would be spent in the mountains.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds cool, but what would you do with the millions of dollars?
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name her Georgia. We would play on the monkey bars at the park. Then we would go to Banana Galore, and have, chocolate covered bananas for him, and a banana split for me. Then we would go to the movie theater and watch Curious George 2, 3, and 4. He would have banana cheese popcorn, and a banana milkshake, and I would have white cheddar and butter popcorn with kool aid. We would go get pizza after the movie. Georgia (my monkey) would get cheese, oops, melted banana instead of cheese with EXTRA bananas! EWW! (but don’t tell my monkey that!) Then we would play on the monkey bars a little more. Finally at the end of the day, we would cuddle up in my bed and listen to music. She would have tiny little headphones. Then we would go to bed. She would be the PERFECT pet monkey!
ReplyDeleteOops, I mean she when I said he would have banana cheese popcorn. Sorry!!
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey for a day I'd name it Pedro. I would get him a tiny hat and I would teach him how to be my servant. He would be awesome. He would get along great with my other pets. He would be crazy.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name him stitch. He would live in my backpack and we would go one lots of advenchures together. Like eating, sleeping, bowling, and traveling to the moon.
ReplyDeleteOf course you would name him Stitch!!!
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey for a day, I would either name her Barbra, or Twilight Sparkle. That’s right, her. I do not want a boy monkey. I would play with her, and eat ice cream for every meal with her. I would take her to the spa with me, and she can get a job, like a manager, and lead people to endorsement deals. I would have so much fun with Barbra/Twilight Sparkle. -Ella
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey his name would be ANTONIO BROWN 21. He would be amazing at football and play for the steelers. He would be very funny and do backflips. He loves football so much. He would dance in the in zone and shake is booty. He would be so funny. He would be gold and black striped with a tattoo that says 84 on his chest. He would be a savage of a guy. He would be the best monkey ever.
ReplyDeletePS He is a boy
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name him JoJO Felesha Harambe jr. He would be so legit. He would be an amazing at basketball. He would play on the Bulls and I would sit courtside every game. It would be so awesome!! I would fly all around the world with him. He would also be a rapper. He would wear headphones. a leather jacket, and skinny jeans. He would also be so famous.
ReplyDeleteYours is super funny!!! ;) -Ella
DeleteVery funny :)
DeleteIf I could spend a whole day with a monkey, I would name it Leonardo Da Monkey. I would go to a rain forest with Leo and would see some monkeys and sloths. We would eat sushi for lunch and go to a zoo without monkeys. We would go to a movie theater and watch a Jason Bourne movie in 3D. Finally we would go sit on a mountain and watch the sun set. We would also sleep on the mountain. That is all I would do with Leonardo Da Monkey. (P.S. Thanks for the name Leo Nardo Da Vinci.)
ReplyDeleteI love the name Leo Nardo De Monkey!
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey she would be a girl and her name would be Rocky. Her favorite music is rock. She is very spunky and unique. We would go climbing a day while listening to rock music. after that we would drink some kool aid and then go climb the rocky mountains.(it is named after her) then after that we would go home and get a good night sleep.
ReplyDeleteI love the name rocky!
DeleteI love the name Rocky!
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey her name would be Cocoa. What we would do all day is go to the monkey bars at the playground. After that, we would go home and watch a movie. We would drink hot cocoa and eat bananas while watching the movie. It would be so fun!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name him Timmy !
ReplyDeleteThe first thing I would do with Timmy would call Uber and go to the Adventure Science Center. There we would cause the most mischief the world has ever seen! We would come in yelling our heads of, after someone told us to stop yelling we would wait 30 seconds, and then stop yelling again. We would stay at the Adventure Science Center until they kick us out for being to bad!
Then we would go to percy priest while school is going on, and play on the playground. When the bell rings for school to be out we will refuse to go inside, and run back to my house.
We would eat a bowl of Halloween candy for dinner! That night we would sleep together!
That’s what I would do if I had a pet monkey!
I love the name and how you and your monkey would eat Halloween candy for dinner.
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey It would be a lady. She would be a monkey from the jungle book, butt she would half to wear a diaper. Her name would be Susan Gelly The Third. We would go to the park and play on the monkey bars. We would also watch a monkey movie together, and go to a stables to ride a horse. When the day is done we would go to bed and eat bananas!!!! So that’s what would happen if I had a monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey I would name it Monkey Trump. He would have a huge modern mansion with a pool, a big bedroom, and more. He would have a gold chair and eat steak with chicken and fries and gravy with mash potatoes. We would travel together and find gold. He would have a double decker plane called the MTRUMP. The dining room would be so tall that Mr. Kraai could stand in it. He would have a gold statue of him with a torch called the Monkey of Liberty. That is what my monkey would do if I had one.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey his name would be P.J. We would go to the store and buy bananas. He would stare at bananas for hhhooouuurrrsss!!!!! We would go to the park and play on the monkey bars. He won the hanging upside contest! He even got a medal in a shape of a banana!! That would be my day with a monkey.
ReplyDeleteI would call my monkey Sherbert. She would be a girl.We would go to to the park and clime anything we could.The we'd go to a candy store and we would eat candy for lunch.Sherbert would eat fruit gummies and I would have the hard candy. The we would go to ABOVE ALL and jump for hours. Once Sherbert got tired, we would go home and read books. I would read out loud to her.She would go to sleep in my arms and when I got up to put her in her mini bed, she would hang on to me and not let go. A pet monkey would be amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteMy pet monkey's name is Alex. We would all sorts of things together like maybe building a rocket or fighting a mummy or climbing up the eiffel tower. Discovering something that doesn’t exist or giving a monkey a shower( Alex ). Surfing a tidal wave. Creating nanobots or locating Frankenstein's brain. Finding a dodo bird, painting a cotonnier or driving our sister insane. But if you think that is a crazy day you just wait and see.
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a day with a pet monkey I would name it Bill. He would be my servant.I would teach him how to play basketball, baseball, football, and to hoverboard. I would take him to Disney World. We would go on all of the roller coasters they had.We would go to a restaurant where if you have bad manners you go to another table. Then we would fly to Sweetwater Cafe in Jackson Hole, Wy. Later we would go to Yippee-I-O which is a candy store.We would next go to the jungle and I would meat all of his friends. I would leave Bill in the jungle and go and get another pet monkey for real ,not just for one day.I think we would have a great time.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey for one day, I would call him Gronkowski . We would play all day long. We would play hide and seek and he would win every time. It would be really fun because he is really fast. This is what I would do with my monkey on this exciting day!
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