Read Game 6 poems. Answer each question below. Remember to explain WHY you chose the winner based on poet's craft (rhyme, line breaks, punctuation, simile/metaphor, word choice, repetition) AND your personal connection to the meaning. Don't forget to write with M.I.N.T.S.!
Your post needs to include the following:
1. What is the meaning of the first poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
2. What is the meaning of the second poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
3. Based on the criteria, which poem did you choose and WHY?
***Please tell me everything you think, but use your best writing.
The first poem, Do you Carrot for me is about a man describing a woman and what their relationship is by using word play
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Castle in the Fire is about a castle being attacked by a dragon. A lady is stuck inside, then a knight in shinning armor comes and saves the day.
I chose Do you Carrot me as the winner because it has bad word play very very bad word play. The poet used vegetables to describe his wife, for example when he said with your turnip nose and your radish face you're a peach It had a good rhythm even though it didn't rhyme. That is why i chose this poem.
The first poem do you carrot all for me is a poem using vegetable puns and is a poem about a boy talking to a girl.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem a castle in the fire is about a castle under attack and has a fairy tale ending so is pretty much a shorter version of a fairy tale.
I chose do you do carrot all for me I like the puns and how they all are vegetable puns.
The first poem, Do you carrot all for me?, is about a love story,vegetable style.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about someone seeing a whole castle in there own fireplace!
I chose, do you carrot all for me? because it was very quarky. It used tons of great word play like " If we cantaloupe" instead of "If we can't elope" to really get the message across. Also, it had great imagery describing the woman's "radish" face and her "turnip" nose. I think Do you carrot all for me? is definitely the winner.
The first poem, Do you Carrot all for me, is about a person that is talking about someone using plants. The second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about is about a knight that fights a dragon to get a girl. I choose the Castle in the fire as the winner. I liked it better,both made sense it made more sense, and I thought it was a better poem. I used imagery in it, but Do you Carrot all for me did not have any.
ReplyDeleteThe first poem Do you carrot all for me, is about fruits and vegetables and it uses funny things like my heart beets for you, and the word beets means my heart beats for you. It also uses lettuce marry; and the word lettuce is saying let us marry.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem The Castle in the Fire, is basically a short version fairytale where the knight saves the lady.
I chose Do you carrot all for me, as the winner because I like the comedic things they say like My heart beets for you. Also I like the one where it says Lettuce marry.
Also I like the rhyme and the concept of the poem that is why I chose Do you carrot all for me.
The first poem, Do you carrot all for me, Is a play on words using food like carrot, turnip, beets, and other vegetables.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about a lady stuck in a tower and there is a fire breathing dragon guarding the tower. Then a knight comes and saves her and they ride away together.
I choose Do you carrot all for me the winner be cause I liked the play on words.
I think the first poem, Do You Carrot All For Me, is about someone asking if someone else cares for them through food. I think the second poem, The Castle In The Fire, is about a knight who saves a princess from a dragon. I choose Do You Carrot All For Me as the winner because I love the puns the author uses. I also love how I can just see someone eating the food in the poem. I love how he is comparing that person that he like into food. I think it is a great poem.
ReplyDeleteThe first poem, Do you carrot all for me?, is about a person asking another person if they like the other person. I like this poem because it has great word play. The poem has a food name in every verse like turnip, beets, cantaloupe...
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about a prince trying to save a princess from a tower. On the way he hast to fight a dragon. The rhyme pattern is A,B,C,B,D,B,E,B...
I think the winner should be, Do you carrot all for me?, I love the word play sooo much. It made me laugh every time I read it. Lastly, the poem kept me interested. The other one was boring to me.
The first poem, do you carrot all for me? is about a guy telling his girlfriend that he loves her and wants to know if she love him as much.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The castle in the fire is about a dragon guarded castle that is on fire but a knight comes and saves the lady in the castle and everything is happy!
I chose Do you carrot all for me? As the winner because it is funny how he describes his love with veggie puns like, " Lettuce mary." There is no rhyme scheme but there is a veggie in each sentence. That is why that poem is the winner.
The first poem, Do you carrot at all for me? is about someone else describing someone with word play.It says in the poem "my heart beets for you." It used different vegetables and fruits each time to describe something.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about a castle that is burning and a girl is trapped inside. Then a knight saves the girl from the castle. The rhyming pattern was ABABAB.
I chose, Do you carrot all for me? as the winner because I thought it had fun word play. Some of them were hard to understand but I thought it was a funny poem once you had read it a couple times. I thought it was cool how used vegetables and fruits in the poem and it still able to understand it. I never found any rhymes in this poem like I have found in other poems. But I thought that using that word play was very creative.
The first poem is Do you carrot all for me is a poem about 2 food that really like each other I don't know how food can do that but yah. That my little speech about do you carrot all for me.
ReplyDeleteThe second is The castle in the fire it is about a castle and it is in a fire because of a dragon and in the world of fantasy land. (like skyrim.) Then a slender night shows up to fight the dragon. That is my little poem about a castle in the fire.
I vote for The castle in the fire because it so cool and sum words remind me of video games like the slender night shows up slender <-- does that ring a bell, da slender man. The dragon <-- that should ring a lot of bell like skyrim I could go on for ever. that is why I vote for The castle in the fire.
The first poem Do you Carrot all for Me is about a person asking someone if they care for them. They are using vegetable and fruit words in the sentences instead of not fruit or vegetable words.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem The Castle in the Fire is about a lady and she is in the castle when the knight come and sees her beautiful face in the window. He runs past the dragon and into the castle five seconds later he is riding of with the princess.
I chose The Castle in the Fire as the winner because I like how the dragon is guarding the castle like in a lot of fairytale books. You can almost picture it in your mind because the poem has good details. The poem has imagery which helps me understand the poem better.
The first poem, Do You Carrot All For Me, is about someone asking if someone else loves them saying,"Lettuce marry!"
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in The Fire, is about a knight saving a lady from a dragon and soon the lady was safe!
I liked Do You Carrot All for Me best. I enjoyed the play-on words and silly imagery.
same with me
DeleteThe first poem is called Do you Carrot all for me?It is about using different words and say at the same time will you marry me.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem is called The Castle In the fire and it is about a knight saving a lady on a dragon in a fire!
I choose Do you Carrot all for me. The reason is because Ithought it was funny and it had a good word play.It was hard to do imagery in this poem. I was fun poem to read.One last thin is where it said, " If we cantaloupe." I thought that was funny.
The first poem, Do you carrot all for me?, is about a man talking to the one he loves and it uses play on words that involve either fruits or veggies.
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The second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about two boys that are watching a castle that is being attacked by dragons and there is a princess inside! A brave knight comes to rescue her and he fights with the dragons and saves the princess!
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I chose, Do you carrot all for me? as the winner because I love the fabulous bad wordplay. It runs in the family to like wordplay actually because my mom insists on having a birthday card with a pun on it.
I also like it because it has no rhyme scheme but it flows nicely.
The first poem, Would You Carrot for me? is about someone who loves someone and loves them so very much.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem,A Fire In The Castle is about dragons fighting agaisnt each other.
I chose The Castle In The Fire is my winner because I loved that there was no rhyming scheme. I also loved about the dragons fighting agaisnt each other. I loved the detail. I loved the end.
I think the main idea of the poem the castle in the fire is that a person is watching a knight save a princes in a burning castle. I think it is kind of like the book rapunzel.
ReplyDeleteI also think the main idea of do you carrot all for me is about a person saying food names that sound like phrases and sentences.
I choose for my favorite poem castle in a fire I choose this poem because I like how they rhyme and I like the story it makes me laugh . unlike the real fairy tail it has a lot of humor and I can picture it in my head better.
Great job Lulu. Nice choice. I also really liked that detail in your sentences, but I don't think there is any rhyming in Castle In The Fire.
Delete1) Do you carrot all for me is about someone saying do you care about me but replacing the loving words with vegetables.
ReplyDelete2) The castle in the fire is about a dragon who tries to eat a women but a knight who is in love with the women tries to fight the dragon and wins.
Opinion) I like the poem Do you carrot all for me better because I liked how the changed the love poem into a vegetable poem. I also liked it better because The castle in the fire was harder to understand. I also liked it because It didn't have a rhyme scheme pattern but it was still good. Even though I choose Do you carrot all for me over The castle in the fire, I liked both of them.
The first poem, Do you carrot all for me?, is about a man telling his girlfriend how much he loves her and how pretty she is by using food to explain.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the fire, is about a knight that saved the princess from a fire breathing dragon.
My favorite poem was, Do you Carrot all for Me? It had lots of metaphors such as,"You are a peach." It also had very good play on words like,"My heart beets for you, With your turnip nose And your radish face." I was able to make an image in my mind of how the lady looked.
The first poem Do You Carrot At All For Me I think is about someone saying some lines. Also the writer replaced some words with vegtables.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem The Castle In The Fire I think is about a castle in war and when it starts the warriors are not there. Also then a prince comes in.
I think the poem Do You Carrot At All For Me is the better poem. Because it has very funny word replcements. Plus it has very good flow. That is why I like this poem more.
the first poem, do you carrot all for me is about a guy who loves carrots and talks about how much he wants to marry them.
ReplyDeleteThe castle in the fire is about a castle that is on fire and there's a lady at the top of it. THe night saves the lady and they live happily ever after.
I like the castle in the fire better because of the meaning. I like that the castle was on fire. The end was the best part.
The first story Do you carrot all for me? Is about a man who is using a lot of vegetable references to ask someone to marry him.
ReplyDeleteThe second story The Castle in the Fire is about a castle that catches on fire , and a lady can't escape. But no one has time to save her, so a night rides in on his horse and saves the lady.
I chose The Castle on the Fire because it was a action packed story that used descriptive words that made you feel like you were in the story.She used words such as the roar of the fire and the turret window. This is why I chose this poem v
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The first poem do you carrot all for me is about someone asking if they care at all for them. In this poem they use play and words, and I think that it really completes the poem and makes it very funny.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem the castle in the fire. It is about a castle and a knight at the castle has to fight a dragon.
Out of the two poems I choose "Do you Carrot all for me". I choose this poem because I loved how they played with words and made it very funny. Another reason I choose "Do you carrot all for me is because I really enjoyed the meaning and how they made it very funny. That is why I choose do you carrot all for me.
The first poem, Castle in the Fire, is about a big castle guarded by dragons. It also is about the castle catching on fire.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Do you carrot all for me, is about a person who likes carrots. It is also about a radish face.
I think the winner is Castle in the fire, because it rhymes a lot. It also is really interesting. I think the best part is the story line.
The Castle in the Fire, is about a castle on fire. There is a dragon that is attacking it. There is a lady in the castle. a night comes to save her.
ReplyDeleteDo you Carrot at all for me, is about someone telling someone else that they love them. They use a lot of fruits and veggies in the poem.
My favorite was do you carrot at all for me. I liked it because it had good word play. I thought it was very clever. I thought it was very easy to read.
I think Do you Carrot all for Me is about a vegetable or fruit that is in love with another vegetable or fruit. The man is telling the lady how much he likes her.
ReplyDeleteI think The Castle in the Fire is about an enchanted castle that is burning down. These knights are trying to save a lady that is in the burning. One knight finally saves the lady and they fall in love.
I choose Do you Carrot all for me for the winner. I choose it because I saw a imagery in my head. I also noticed that it does not have a rhyme scheme .
Do You Carrot For Me is about a person asking do you care for me.
ReplyDeleteThe castle in the fire is about a knight who saves a princess.
I chose The Castle In The Fire because of it's deep meaning. It gives you a huge mental image in your mind. It's almost like your there at the fire. I love how the knight swoops in to get the princess.
DO YOU CARROT ALL FOR ME is about a boy talking to his girlfriend and asking questions with food in them. It does not have a rhyme scheme.
ReplyDeleteTHE CASTLE in the FIRE is about a group of people looking at a castle and see a night riding in to save a princess.
I choose THE CASTLE in the FIRE as the winner. I choose it as the winner because I like the story it tells. I notice the rhyme scheme is random A random A and so on.
The first poem, Do you Carrot all for me, is about a man who is rejected by a woman he loves and the man makes a song about veggys.
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The second poem, The Castle in the Fire is about some people see a dragon who invades a knight's castle and fights the knight and loses.
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I chose the The Castle in the Fire.I liked it because it was very action packed.I also liked the rhyme scheme (AABBCC).
The first poem, Do you carrot all for me, is about Anonymous asking her friend, “Do you carrot all for all for me? My heart beets for you.” I like her poem because of she uses foods that sound like words, for example, Lettuce marry=Let us marry, or, Weed make a swell pear=We’d make a swell pair.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The castle in the Fire, is about a knight fighting dragons for a lady in a castle. The castle blows up on fire and the humble knight and beautiful lady ride out into the sunset. Mary Jane Carr does a great job of explaining the poem, for example she says, “With slender lance a-tilting, Thrusting with a skillful might, He charged at the dragons- Ah, ‘twas a brilliant fight.”
My favorite poem was- Do you carrot all for me? I liked the poem better because of Anonymous made it fun to read by using vegetables for words. There aren’t any similes, but the author uses fun and different words (lettuce, carrot, weeds, pear, cantaloupe, beets, turnip, radish, and peach). These are the reasons why I like this poem better.