Imagine that for one day only you could have a pet monkey! What would you do with your pet? What would you name him/her? What adventures would you two have? Please describe your day with your new friend.
Remember, students, to watch out for run-ons, and to write in complete sentences. I look forward to reading your comments!
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If I had a pet monkey, I would name it Bailey. If I could do anything with Bailey, I would go to the park to let her play. Of course, I would have to play too. We would mostly play at the monkey bars. Our hearts would start to pump in excitement. After that, we would go to California Pizza Kitchen. Bailey would get a big pepperoni pizza, and I would get mac and cheese. We would mainly just stay there and talk with each other. After that, we would go to the candy store and get lots of candy. Bailey would get all banana flavored candy. Finally, we would go home and snuggle up on the couch. I would read Curious George to her, ad she would fall asleep in my arms. That would be my day with Bailey.
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Mrs. Eads
If I could spend a day with a monkey I would name him Lucas. We would watch Full House and laugh at Danny's weird outfits. Then, we would make brownies. Next, we would eat as many bananas as possible. Finally, We would go to China and look at all of the moneys there. We would monkey around all day.
ReplyDeleteanna you are so right
DeleteI heart full house and brownies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteIf I could have a pet monkey for a day I would name him Horace. First we would go the skate park and do some awesome flips! Then we would go buy a pretzel vendor and go around selling pretzels. We would use the money we made to get some ice cream. Then we would go home and sleep in a tree. I would love to have Horace for a day!!!
ReplyDeleteHorace sounds awesome!
DeleteMy monkey can do the warped wall at Above All.(Financially speaking.)
Delete( BURN BURN BURN BURN BURNED)
If I could have a pet monkey for the day I would name him Jojo. We would go to the jungle gym, and play on the monkey bars for a little bit. Next, we would go to lunch. I would get mac & cheese. Jojo would get bananas. Then, we would go to the candy store. Jojo would get banana shaped candy. Finally, we would go home!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Clone, because he can transform into anyone or anything. First, I would bring him to school he would transform into the principal and declare that we had a day off. Next, he would transform into my mom and declare that I could have a friend over to play. After that, he would turn into a ticket manager and get me tickets to a football game. We would watch the football game and then go home and watch a movie and then go to bed. It would be the best day ever.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, it would be named Moe Fergus. Moe Fergus would always wear bell bottoms and an old-timey judge wig. Some things Moe Fergus and I would do is take tango lessons in Florida. Next, we would go to Washington, D.C to prank the president. Finally, Moe Fergus and I would ride a moped around the world while eating banana pudding with vanilla wafers. That would be the perfect day with my monkey, Moe Fergus.
ReplyDeleteThe fact that your monkey can tango is awesome!
DeleteIf I had a monkey for a day I would name her Anna! First Anna and I would go on a saffari and eat bananas.After that we would go rock climbing at Climb Nashville!Then we would eat lunch at Tokyo,and go to Sugar Dive,and dive into all the sugar.To top of the day we would go to my house,and have a sleep over and watch movies all night long!!!
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a monkey I would name him Denzel Washington. First we would go to see Toopy and Binoo the Big Race! Then I would eat a big cake Denzel would eat a strawberry cake (because we all know that monkeys love strawberries) Next I would train him to be a jedi knight. Then we would blow up the DEATH STAR, then take a nap. Finally he would get a masters in business and take over the world. Now monkeys are the supreme species financially speaking.
ReplyDeletecool story luke
DeleteI like it!!
DeleteI like too
DeleteYour story was the best! Maybe next time Billy and I could come.
DeleteNO U WOULD DIE financially speaking
DeleteWait Billy is a death proof. He can not die!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteU are not
DeleteI bet my monkey, Luke, is better in a financial standpoint.
DeleteMy MONKEY IS THE MOST FINANCIALLY CORRECT MONKEY IN THE WORLD (financially speaking)
Deletecan my Aipom come in
DeleteTHE MAGNIFICENT MANGO MONKEY WILL CRUSH YOU ALL! (of course financially speaking he will!)
DeleteLuke y r u committing on ur own thing.
DeleteIs aipom death proof :)
DeleteMy monkey pays his bills!
Deleteno please
DeleteIs aipom death proof :)
Deleteyo sup do any of YOUR monkeys pay their bills!
Deletewhat is your name monkey yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
DeleteMMM IS a fail boy ( BURN BURN BURN BURN)
DeleteBRO MY MONKEY INVENTED BILLS
Deletemy monkey inventit the IRS
DeleteMMM is too good for you
Deletecool beans brah
DeleteEven if he wasn't he would be a Nyan Cat anyway
DeleteFinancially my monkey is jabba the hut
DeleteMy monkey inventit life bro
DeleteA lot of replies! My monkeys name is Jim jr!
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name it Billy. The first thing we would do would be to jump off a cliff and glide over mountains and rivers. Then, we would go scuba diving. After that, we would have lunch and have a big juicy steak. Then, we would fly on a private jet to Colorado, and snowboard and ski. Then, we would fly back. We would invent time travel. We would go into the future and fly in flying cars and see everything in the future. Just imagine what it would be like to have a pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteNice name!
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name her Coco. If I could do anything with Coco I would go to the park and we would play on the swings. Then we would go to the grocery store and get 15 bananas and eat them all.After, we would get on tuxedos and went to work. Our job was to eat bananas. Finally, we would get in a race car and ride all around town with Coco's head sticking out the window. That would be my day with Coco. We got her goggles they were banana goggles.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him the Magnificent Mango Monkey. First I would have him build my robot, and he would be the ultimate helper. I'd say, "Pass me the screwdriver!" and he would give me it. Then we would ride my robot all the way to Jeni's ice cream, and my Magnificent Mango Monkey would get banana sorbet and I would get salted caramel flavor. Our robot would get oil. Then we would go to the natural history museum in DC and make friends with an albino alligator and see dino skeletons. Then my robot would fly us home and we would watch TV.
ReplyDeleteMy cousins live in DC
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey I'd name it Bananas. If I could do anything with Bananas, we'd go to Parmer Park and play until the ice cream truck came. I'd order everything with bananas on it for Bananas and I'd get a fudge pop. Then we'd go to the play The Jungle Book. After that I'd take Bananas to one of my favorite restaurants called Feniza. I'd get pasta of course and Bananas would get pizza. Then before bed we'd watch National Geographics.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him Cow. Cow and I would go to the playground and swing on the monkey bars. But, Cow would miss his family. So, we went to the rain forest. Cow would eventually find his family. After 30 minutes or so I said, "it's time to go."Cow did not want to leave his family. So, I let his family live with me. That would be the day with Cow, and all of his family.
ReplyDeleteYour so nice to let Cow live with his family.
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey for a day I would name him biscuits or buddy. First, we would climb trees and eat cheese burgers,french fries and Dr.pepper at Sam's Place. Then, I would go by him a stuffed animal pig named chunky. Finally,we would also play golf and watch football games at Sam's Place. That's what I would do if could have a monkey for a day
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a pet MONKEY for one day .I would name it Katie. We would play where you climb a tree and how ever got up first wins. Katie always wins except for one time I won but it was because Kaite saw another monkey. Then we would go see a documentary on monkeys.We would climb the tree again and have our picnic. We would go find a candy store and get candy,We would talk for a long time. It would be 8:00 so we would go read a book. Katie would fall asleep in my arms.Then I would go to sleep too.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a chimp for one day I would name it Gorilla. I would take her to the playground at the zoo for hours! Then we build a secret treehouse hideout just for us! Then we go see who can gather the most bananas in one minute. Of course, I win, because Gorilla eats all her bananas! Then we go to Sweet CeCe's and get loads of candy but no ice cream! Then we go to the movies and eat popcorn. Finally we eat dinner at The Rainforest Cafe'! That would be my day with Gorilla the chimp.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him Luke. In the morning we would go to Holiday World and ride almost everything twice. We would each get a snack while we are there. Luke would get a banana and I would get a slice of cherry pie. We would do everything as quick as we could. We would eat at Moe's. Luke would get a burrito and a cookie I would get a cheese quesadilla and a cookie.When we were done we would go sky diving. We would get done right before dinner. For dinner we would go to California Pizza Kitchen. Luke would get a cheese pizza and I would get fusilli noodles with butter. For dessert we would each get a butter cake. Then, we would go home and watch a movie. That would be my day with a pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf i had a monkey for a day his name would be Niagara and we would go to the zoo to see his best friends Sir, Hippo the gorilla, Miss Swan the leopard, and Miss Pig the penguin. Then we would all go for ice cream Miss Pigs paying i would get Moose Tracks and Niagara would get a large banana split hold the the ice cream extra bananas. Then we would drop our friends of at the zoo and go home.
ReplyDeleteI just wake up, and I see a monkey in my house. "Why is there a monkey in my house!" I said. There is a note on his head it says, please take care of Aipom. I know I have heard that name before. Then I know where I have heard that name! It is Ash's monkey. It says to feed him at breakfast, lunch, and dinner. Ash will be back on Saturday and today is Friday. I fed him some food then we went to the park. We stayed there till lunch time. Then we went to the house. We played video games. We had so much fun. It was dinner time. We ate food then for bed. I woke up and said "Hey Aipom do you want to go to the park?" but Aipom wasn't there but there was a note it was from Ash. Thank you for taking care of Aipom. Here is 10 dollars. thank you for taking care and good by. Well that is my day with a monkey slash Aipom good by.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey it would be named Jim. I would let her run to the candy store. When we got to the candy store, we would get banana flavored gummy worms! Of course we had to go to the arcade, so we started to play monkey games, and we would win 3 monkey stuffed animals! After the arcade we would go to Corner Pub and talk for 3 minutes and then watch monkeys play football. For lunch we would have mac and cheese. When we are done we go home and take a 7 hour nap! That would be a fun day with Jim!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey his name would be Bob. First we would go to the candy store and buy all of the banana flavored items. Then we would go buy a store and name it "Go bananas". Then after a long day we would go watch all the monkey movies we could find. I think having a monkey for a day would be great.
ReplyDeleteYou copied mine a little bit!
DeleteNo he didn't.
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey for a day I would name it George. George and I would go to IHop for breakfast, and both get peanut butter and banana pancakes. After that we would go to Above All, and George and I would e win every time at dodgeball.We would go to the American Ninja Warrior course, and George would be able to do every obstacle. Then we would go to Baskin Robins and get a giant banana split. We would go home and stay up all night watching the Harry Potter movies. Imagine how fun it would be to have a pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, it's name would be Super Tate. We would first eat breakfast then go to a gymnast center, and play around on the equipment. We would play on the bars the most. Then we would go to a smoothie shop, and Super Tate would get a banana cream smoothie while I would have a strawberry lemon one. After that, we would take a huge nap read books. For dinner, we would have mac-and-cheese. For dessert we would have chocolate covered bananas. It would be a great day!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name it Little munkster. We would climb trees and hang upside down. Then we would go to the store and buy tons and tons of bananas and eat them all. After that we would go to the movies and watch a monkey movie. After the movies we would go home and have a banana stand, but he would eat them all before one customer could come. Little Munkster is the best monkey ever!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey It would be awesome! I would name her Monks. First we would eat a lot of bananas. Then we would go to the zoo and meet all of Monks' friends. Finally we would eat more bananas while sitting on the couch. It would be a crazy day.
ReplyDeleteIf owned a pet monkey I would name him Phil. Phil and I would to a place I like to ski in Montana. We would drink hot coco and go to a california pizza kitchen. After we skied we would watch a movie and eat popcorn. This is what it would be like if I had a pet monkey for a day.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey for a day I would name it Bananas. We would have the best day ever! First we would go eat breakfast. Bananas would get bananas and i would get pancakes. When the food comes Bananas would go bananas. After breakfast we would go to the movies. We would see every single one of them. We would eat popcorn and candy for lunch at the movies. By the time all of the movies were over it would be dinner time. For dinner we would go to eat at The California Pizza Kitchen. That would be my day with Bananas!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey i'd name him Bacon because he could produce bacon in 10 seconds anyway to start day we would go eat breakfast at waffle house and get waffles and of course bacon. Then after we ate breakfast we would go to disneyland and ride every single ride then we would go to the little miniature race car track and bacon would sit next to me and press the gas pedal once we got our trophy for first place we would go back home and play madden on the xbox we would be the packers once we finished it was time for bed. That's what me and my monkey would do
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it agent B.A.N.A.N.A.S.. First we would go get badges for the F.B.I.. Next we would go to the special don don don coffe store. Then after we got magic coffe, we would ride around in cool cars and chase criminals. After that, we would do a pie in the face to a criminal. Also we would blow up a building and sky dive off of it. Lastly, we would go cart home and blow up everything. That is what a day would be like with agent B.A.N.A.N.A.S..
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Cora. He would be very loud just like the real Cora. We would eat lots of ice cream while playing with stuffed animals. Then we would go to the water park and slide down the biggest water slide and float down the lazy river. For dinner we would have bacon and churros with lots of cinnamon. That would be the best day with a monkey named Cora!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, it would be named Ms.Bananas. She would even have her own theme song. It would go like this it's time to go bananas, B-A-N-A-N-A-S. We would go to the park and play on Saturdays. On Sundays, we would play volleyball together.It would be awesome to have a monkey
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