Dear students,
Please write at least a 5 sentence paragraph about the following:
Imagine you opened your own restaurant. What would the name of your restaurant be? What kind of food would you serve? What does your restaurant look like? Where is your restaurant located? Have fun and be creative.
Remember, students, to watch out for run-ons, and to write in complete sentences. I look forward to reading your comments!
Your paragraph must…
- be at least 5 sentences long
- written in complete sentences
- use M.I.N.T.S.
- have a topic sentence and supporting details
- have a closing sentence
Here is an example of an advanced/proficient comment:
If I could open up a restaurant, its name would be Rene's. This restaurant would have all the Italian food you could ever imagine! Every person would get an appetizer, entree, and a very good desert. The walls in this restaurant would have pictures of Italy all over it. You would sit in booths, a table, or upstairs in a high top. We would serve lasagna, pizza, any type of pasta, and much more Italian food. If I could open up this restaurant, I would do it because of my dad's side of the family is Italian! All of my employees would come straight from the best restaurants in Italy! We would have Italian people come to our restaurant just because our food is so good. My restaurant would always be playing Italian music or have a famous Italian singer there. If I had this restaurant, it would mean so much to my guests, employees, my family and friends.
Happy blogging,
Mrs. Eads
The exquisite food at Rene's would be a must! The invitations from you will be highly appreciated!
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